Twilight of the Republic

Jedi Master Celestia and her apprentices Twilight And Sunset command the newly minted Victory 1-Class Destroyer 'New Dawn' into the heart of Separatist space. When their Troopers turn on the jedi following order 66 Twilight is left alone to fight against the newly christened Galactic Empire. The fall of the Jedi will affect every child of the force.

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MorpheustheDream

MorpheustheDream #1 · Aug 30th, 2018 · · · Battle of Raxus ·

Not gonna lie, I hesitated a bit when I saw this. But I like what I am seeing so far. Keep it up m8

CrimsonCadenza

CrimsonCadenza #2 · Aug 30th, 2018 · · · Battle of Raxus ·

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I would too. This is more SW then MLP so it may not be for everyone. Instead of bringing the ponies to the SW galaxy I wanted them to already be there and make sense, so they are star wars species. Im trying to bring as much from their characters over into their SW counterparts and still make sense.

If the mirror Universe gets brought up I guess this is one of those alternate worlds with the same characters. I'll admit halfway through I just thought it was too awkward and almost gave up but but I like how this chapter turned out. Its probably the most coherent thing I've written.

MorpheustheDream

MorpheustheDream #3 · Aug 31st, 2018 · · · Battle of Raxus ·

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Well either way you did a pretty good job. And I understand that it would be more SW than MLP, and I for one like that. This is mainly because I see myself as more of a SW fan than MLP. Plus, if these characters really were in SW, I could totally see them as their respective races, especially Sunset. I can totally see her as a Zabrak.

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