The heir of Stable 36 finds herself at an impasse when a heavenward explosion results in her saving the life of an Enclave mechanic, only to find out that this singular act of mercy will change not only her life, but the course of Stable 36 history.
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Good to see Sky back on her hoofsies and getting to meet the quirky ponies of the stable.
I like the narration style, it feels a bit detached from the POV character for a more neutral narrator of actions. Poor Tiredpega, I feel bad for giggling at the mental image of her squealing at the first radroach!
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Definitely nice to see the mare on her hooves again! Even if flying is a bit of a no for now. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed the chapter! (And don't worry, I laughed writing that too)
I liked that we got to know more about Skyfire here. She displays a lot of personality just in her body language alone. Speaking of which, the way you write interactions really does a great job of bridging the styles of the two fictions together. It's lighthearted and silly and serious when it needs to be, and neither feel completely out of place. Also, Hammers has the voice of John Goodman.