The heir of Stable 36 finds herself at an impasse when a heavenward explosion results in her saving the life of an Enclave mechanic, only to find out that this singular act of mercy will change not only her life, but the course of Stable 36 history.
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Maniacal laugh! I stole the first post!
In other news have I added your story to the FoE groups, so it should be seen by some more people now
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Ah thank you very much, greatly appreciate that!
I like the cover by the way. It's nice and pleasant to look at.
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*sitting on the wall of text* Well... yup.
Well that was a fun little start to a story! The characters presented so far look like they'll have a fun chemistry going forward, they all have intriguing quirks that makes them a joy to watch play out. Third person omniscient is an interesting choice of narrative style, one that is quite interesting to see play out! Though there is a few hiccups in reading flow due to the nonstandard nature of the perspective I'm positive you'll get your stride with time!
Can't wait to read more of these silly mares, keep up the good work! ^^