Tonight, Princess Luna wanders over Equestria, reflecting on her past decisions, and her own self-worth. As much as Luna has grown and overcome inner turmoils over the years, thanks to her sister and friends, she still can't shake the feeling that her night is inferior to her sisters day. But an unexpected admirer of hers stops for a chat.
(commisioned cover art arrived!)
Cover Artist: Vird-gi
I not only dedicate this story to anyone who may be feeling down as of recently, or at any point in their life. But also my cover artist Vird-Gi, who has been feeling a little low lately. Her cover art for this story will be coming soon, but it has been postponed. I want to give her time to feel better and look after herself first, as her well being is more important than cover art.
Hope you feel better soon, dear.
(UPDATE:)
She is feeling better! The cover art came out better than I could have imagined. You are a wonderful artist! I recommend her to everyone!
Credit to: PrussiAntique For amazing edits and advice, of which the story wouldn't have come together properly without. You are a star!
Featured: 16.08.2018
Thank you everypony!
Recommended listening: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8e69FgcZExs
This helps more than you think. Would you mind if I plugged this on my blog?
Thanks a bunch for the wonderful little story. I'm definitely gonna be saving this one, so I can reread it if I ever feel down.
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I'm glad you found comfort in this, of course you can post it to your blog. Put it anywhere you like, and if you ever find yourself needing to talk to anyone at all, feel free to flick me a Pm.
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Thanks.
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You're very welcome, if you need somepony to talk to during those times as well, my inbox is always open. <3
I'm going to buy some geodes this week just because of this story, I just think you made them into wonderful examples of tough situations. Maud is very smart indeed.
Simple and sweet story.
Makes sense Maud would like Luna.
This time of year in particular, I adore the night and hate the sun.
For Faust's sake, tone it down a few notches, Tia!
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Thanks
This story has earned a place in my "best stories" bookshelf. Well done.
Directly to favs
Spelling out “A thousand” would be more grammatically correct here.
Also, great story! I really liked Maud’s lesson near the end, it was rather heartwarming. My only suggestion besides the one above is to go back and capitalize the “I’s“. As far as I can tell, FimFic doesn’t do autocorrect, so all the I’s have to be capitalized manually.
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Same
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I can't thank you enough! Thanks to your keen eye I spotted a few more errors too, of which I wouldn't have noticed if I wasn't looking for the I’s you mentioned.
Adjustments have been made, thank you once again! x
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You’re very welcome
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This is sweet. Nice dynamic between Luna and Maude. But proper nouns must always be capitalized.
Can I just say - if you're going to use archaic verb forms (hath, dost, etc.), at least make an effort to use them correctly.
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Hey! Yes, you're right, I took a bit of a gamble writing with Luna. I am currently going through edits now PrussiAntique who PM’d me about it earlier yesterday. So hopefully thanks to both of you I can nip these errors in the butt today. :)
I appreciate all the constructive criticism I get!
I'm quite glad I read this.
i am sorry i am agree stories in categorie of baby luna sorry
This is a super sweet story with some excellent character interaction and a nice, positive look at Luna. However, it could use another proof-reading pass.
This was a very impressive way to sum up the elements of harmony, even if that wasn't Mauds intent.