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Yay, it's here. Also, you might want to rename the chapter title to 'Mirror Stare Back.'
Edit: That was good! You write with a style that is clearly your own. There were occasional mistakes, mostly with the use of apostrophes. However, everyone's first work will have such mistakes, and that shouldn't discourage you; only encouraging you to improve and stride forward to becoming a better author (on top of your already excellent art skills) I'm eager to see if you produce anymore work, and I'll consume every work of it. Thanks, and ciao.
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Thank you Jackalope, you words are very much appreciated. And yes it was a long time coming I know but I finally managed to do this mostly on my own, there were many things that I wanted to add but for multiple issues I could finish it the way I wanted. Hopefully the next one will go better then this.
Again thank you for the support
Soviet Equestria's a nag, ain't it?
This story...
Anyway, didn't we meet at Bronycon?
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Thanks for the comment, not sure those this have anything to with the the soviets, I am guessing you homogenate beings in some sense?
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I think you are mistaken me with someone else, never been there. but I have a guess who your are referring to, Kablam Pony is my guess.
Still thanks for the comment.
My bad. Actually can't remember the name of the guy I met.
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It's an English joke based off Yakov Smirnov, a Russian who left the USSR. The format is called Russian Reversal and is meant to sound funny and oppressive. Example: In America, you can always find the party, but in Soviet Russia, the party can always find YOU!
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I was thinking "In Soviet Equestria, Mirror starews at you".
I'm rather confused as to what Crescent is supposed to look like... You say "the blue pegasus" and then follow with "Astonishingly enough, both he and the Doctor (he constantly insisted on that) shared the same brown spiky swept back mane and tail style along with a light brown coat" and further on, call him cream... It just leaves me a bit befuddled.
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Odd, that wasn't in my older notes, probably a misunderstanding during the editing process to make it more readable, will change it now, thanks.
Pinkie Pie, Mirror Pool, Pinkie Clones and a what feels like a Black Mirror episode done by MLP.
Overall good job.
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Thanks Qwefg, I really appreciate that you read it.
it's a cute story i like!
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thanks
You did better then I did with my first story, I've got to say. As you know I'm still have problems with my spelling and editing. It was a creepy fun story to read and I am glad that I was able to read it. For some reason I kept getting a horror vibe form the atmosphere, was that what you were going for? It reminds me an old version of the the SC IF classic Invasion of the Body Snatchers. There is just so much I can see going on that I don't know where I can start. I mean the implications of pinkie clones replacing ponies. To me it was a good blend of creepy and fun and I would like to read it again.
By the way 120 in my second looks Folder, Nice job.
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Thanks Freewing Alchemist P, happy to see your comment, to answer your question yes I did try create a lot of tension and things confusion for the main character who doesn't know what's happening around him and is scared. I like putting the emphasis on the motivations a feeling of the protagonist to put there reader in the hear and now which is to me what best place the readers in his horseshoes. This was originally meant to be in a twining contest which I was inspired from for this story and was wondering for a while if there was more to the mirror pool that we still didn't even know about that could lead to it's dark secrets.
9132612 You differently did a good job in making me feel what the protagonist was going through, good job. The Mirror pool does seem to have a lot of secrets that could be exploited. When writing keep in mind not just to do things that have never been done but how you can tell a story that was already told in a more eye catching way. I'm am glad you have a clear idea of your style and how to use it. For me I understand writing, but my own style is still a work in progress. I am glad that a compaction got you to write your first story, congratulation.
Existential horror. Neat. Brings to mind the feelings of when people started on the fancanon that changelings could convert other ponies to their race.
It's classic zombie horror. Similar feelings were used in Neon Genisis Evangellion, with the LC clones dissolving people and adding them to the mass of deranged killer clones.
I swear there was another different series that had conversion on touch, but I can't remember it right now off the top off my head.
Well done.
*polite golf clap*
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What do you mean? Sorry I don't understand what you are saying.
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Because I have aspergers syndrome, I thought it was the only criteria to post s story there. If it's not then I guess you can remove it, no biggy.
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Made by a Autistic/Author, but no Asperger/Autistic character
Yet another reason to feel bad for all those Pinkie clones Twilight murdered...
Pretty horrifying story, if do say so myself.
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thanks dude for reading and appreciating the story. I had wonder for a long while if there was more to that mirror pond other then just cloning and Pinkie enable other things to it, which sounded like a good horror setting.
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Question: is this supposed to be what actually happened in “Too Many Pinkie Pies”, or just an unrelated story inspired by it?
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The idea was that this is set after that event where one of the clones manage to escape and started to 'recruit' other Pinkie Pies and keep them their until they reach a critical mass to spread much faster in mass all over Equestria. Pinkie Pie just awoke up the magic of the Mirror Pool and decided to use Pinkie as a templet to spread its magic further, she is just a means to an ends to it.
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Huh. I didn’t know that wasn’t supposed to be the original Pinkie.
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that was intentionally meant to be misleading and to keep the mystery of the story by keeping things unanswered.
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the Pinkie Pie we saw at the beginning and end was Crescent's friend Pockie Pierce which is what she has a strange reaction in holding the remains of his own in her hoof and threw it away symbolizing that she isn't him anymore.
Wow, that was a strangely evil thing for Pinkie to do. It has me thinking that the real Pinkie is nothing to do with it, and maybe it's her mirror pool clones trying to come back.
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What you perceive as Pinkie Pie, or a Pinkie Clone, was originally once Pokey Piece Crescent's friend that was flirting with him now Pinkie Pie thanks to the mirror pool who had lured him there to join in on the Pinkie Pie party. The implied severed unicorn horn it picked up was just sturing up some vague memories of what it was before.
The best way to describe what this Pinkie Pie is is that she is a sort of sock puppet controlled by some Eldritch horror with it's tentacles, that uses to lure it's victims to it and to perpetuate itself; The pinkie Pie is just a disguise or sheep's clothing it uses to best achieve it's goals. It might not even know what it's doing, or even understand why, only that it does what it does and allows to feed consume and perpetuate itself; and at great success I might add. On could also compare it to a AI chat bot it as it only seems like it's actually trying communicating with you or seems inelegant, but in reality actually just a program that uses an algorithm that manages to spew out coherent sentences that seems to understand what it's saying which it doesn't even know you even exist or what a pony even is. And other example would be Mickey Mouse, who is the loveable figure head /mascot of Disney that it choses to present itself as to the public but is actually a heartless soulless money making evil machine that just consume everything in it's . I hope this helps.
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Gotta love it when an eldritch abomination masquerades as a lovable pony.