A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
Liberty cIty, a major city located in the State of Liberty, a city gripped by fear and suspicion. The LCPD does everything it it's might to maintain order and safety. But can a NOOSE officer offer protection to a lost filly named Silver Spoon in those Dark times?
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what a nice story i like it and it has grammar errors in it but still great story
BC.......
You never told me you were into GTA.....
Also you really need a editor buddy.
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Thanks.
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I had One but he quited, saying i was Good enough Without him.
9034035
Well now you have one. Me
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Really?
9034033 np
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Yes. Plus it depends on how far you want to go with it. Add the Episodes from Liberty City or go as far as GTA V if you want.
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Hey, es ist Diamond wo das alles macht, Silver ist anders
That’s some good wholesome stuff right there if I do say so myself. Very good. My only negative comment is that it felt like it was rushed. Like you just wanted to get this first chapter out of the way then you’d create a more illustrious background. Great story and I’ll be tuning in for the next chapter.
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I wrote that 2 years ago with little experience, that's why.
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Oh my. Well. I guess you’ve had plenty of time for editing. My apologies if I offended you in any manner of way.
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It's fine, I actually mentioned that in the discription
i hope princess celestia finds a way into liberty city alright
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Ohh, I assure you, she will like with the others before
9046769 huh?
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My other stories where foals land on Earth.
9047559 oh i see and i hope celestia doesn't get violated in liberty city since she does look hot after all
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First, not my style, and Second she appears at the end of the Story to get Silver Home
9048761 oh i see
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Yes, would not Suit otherwise.
9049029 what wouldn't?
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Good thought
9051080 what?
9051084
I meant your reply.
9051087 then why did you say good thought? after i said what wouldn't? do you seriously can't understand what i'm saying?
9051089
You had a Good thought as i can't Think of anything at the Moment
9051092 wtf are you talking about? where is this conversation even going?
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Nothing if we Continue
9051182 you mean nowhere ugh god you need to work on your english grammar
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I'm German so englisch isn't my First Language.
9051280 yeah ik your German not everyone is good at English you just need practice
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Yep.
9054854 mhm
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I actually got it done a long time ago, just wait for my proofreader to finish it. And while it takes elements for all 3 games, it focuses mostly on Niko
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Speedy Silverstreak
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It's just difficult to him to get to work to college and such. I wrote this a long time ago as beginner, so better safe than sorry
i don't like it i love it this story is so awesome and i'm always the first one to comment on it please continue with this story its way to awesome
9154178
Thanks to a good editor I found, updates should come regulary now.
9154180 oh okay that's awesome to hear
What does NOOSE stand for?
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National Office of Security Enforcement. Basicly, they are the SWAT team in GTA 4 and 5, also based on the U.S. Department of Homeland Security.
I never knew CJ went legit and left Lis Santos
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iTS supossed to be a reference to him
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I know. Next you'll have Tommy Vercetti
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Nope, hadn't thought of him back then.
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He owns a rival taxi company
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Yeah, those missions were fun!
that is not what the robbers said in the game they were swearing like saying fuck these people fuck your cause that shits over that's what they said when they were arguing in the bank i also remember that part as well
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I know, I left that out for Silver's sake