9063026 its long and a little confusing I should probably make a google doc for it.
Long story short its sort of my own take on the multiverse and how it works its why Luna and Celestia keep calling Discord a Lord of Chaos because there are a lot of them
9089431 Hey! Death was being nice and explaining things to the reader also he is under obligational rules set by the House to explain the process to newly dead souls, it's a thing in my universe long live the long winded bureaucracy! May the paper work and form signing ever be tedious!
Also thanks for letting me know the italics were messed up! and that word, I've got a proof reader now so things will get a lot better from here on out.
9090322 Chapter 4 is done!! the last part needs to be looked over by my proof reader and it'll be up~ I hope you guys like it, I had to rewrite the first part like three times
“Sorry… its it's kinda hard to keep things to myself, this filly brain doesn't have any inhibitions when it comes to thoughts and my words.” I said with a light laugh, rubbing my horn. There was a thin layer of skin over the whole horn while not orgasmic in touch like in some fanfictions, touch did feel nice. Supposedly as Pinkie’s limited knowledge on unicorn physiology suggests is that the skin there allows unicorns to sense the mana in the air for spells.
That's what happens when you take a hit to the frontal lobe.
“Sorry… its it's kinda hard to keep things to myself, this filly brain doesn't have any inhibitions when it comes to thoughts and my words.” .
That's what happens when you take a hit to the frontal lobe.
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“Well looks like I have no choice but to ride off toward my doom then.” I grumbled which Pinkie just laughed again that kind that was a belly laugh, I could feel the vibrations of her laughter under me.
Into the jaws of death, into the mouth of hell, rode the... One.
“Sorry… its it's kinda hard to keep things to myself, this filly brain doesn't have any inhibitions when it comes to thoughts and my words.” .
That's what happens when you take a hit to the frontal lobe.
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“Well looks like I have no choice but to ride off toward my doom then.” I grumbled which Pinkie just laughed again that kind that was a belly laugh, I could feel the vibrations of her laughter under me.
Into the jaws of death, into the mouth of hell, rode the... One.
“Simple, we nurture her, we tell the Academy of Gifted Unicorns, and we go from there… Sweetie is brilliant, I-I have a PHD in mathematics Cheerilee and she was blowing me literally out of the everfree.” Scholastic said looking at the sloppy but brilliant chalk marks of Sweetie Belle.
I don't know, that sounds more figurative than literal.
It was such a weird thing feeling your knees go naturally backward rather than forward, but it didn't cause me pain or discomfort so I pressed on.
Those are ankles. The flank is the thigh, where it bends to correspond to the calf, whereas what people mistake for knees is called the hock, and this corresponds to the ankle on a human foot. It's really obvious if you look at the bones in a horse leg, or watch it move.
her very out of practice to have a poker politics face.
To be honest all I could think of was dark chocolate when listening to it.
Though I did have this feeling of lucridarity, nothing around me was set,
What’s that suppose to mean?
wildly out of control if she is exposed to that much Chaos magic.” she urged her sister.
said skill because I am simply not made for it. (——
walk properly on consider in it sank under my weight.
I slid down the side of the bed to get closer to the mirror.
I asked looking over at the pink pony just inches away from me.
“You are, a silly filly~” she snickered as I blushed at the mare, I huffed.
when I get the hang of holding things I’ll draw you a picture…
should be thankful, amen. (——" She added at the end
“Hmm? What's the matter Mr. Cake?” Pinkie asked
Is this what Sherlock felt when he had his mind palace to prance around in?
Made me think of this...
My life crumbled all around me as the explanation was just too simple.
magic so please tell me how you really do it. (——’” She said imitating
Which my mouth was covered by Pinkie’s hoof making a shush motion.
“Sorry, like I said I don’t know a lot of stuff.” I whispered back. Pinkie smiled and gave me a quick nuzzle on the cheek.
became almost blinding if you looked too hard.
The place hummed with magic and energy she could not even begin to understand and it drove her insane with all the questions.
her could make heads or tails of of what it did.
was possibly even too advanced for her made her roil in anger.
“Remember Me… It was the only thing he would say of it.
A stab of pain squeezed her heart seeing her student and adoptive daughter so scared.
What? What’s that suppose to mean?
on him and blamed it it on the brain damage.
“Sorry… its it's kinda hard to keep things to myself,
to know the ponies here, I don’t think anypony here
She chirped as she took the scribbles from my own workbook and took her pencil to mark me on my grammar and lettering.
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didn't have any fabrics on them anymore.
Rarity and Pinkie disappeared off into the kitchen probably to help with the cooking since Pinkie was a excellent gourmet chef as it was one of her passions from our talks about ourselves.
“Is she going to-- corruption?” Rarity’s voice came through in the distance.
“It's alright Sweetie, its it's no skin off my hooves your recovery is what I strive for.
I looked into the mirror once more, finding a smaller toothbrush and lightly minted toothpaste.
I hate mint!!
I stared out the the window
I imagine Warm Smile having a Starry night coat and horn with a yellow mane and tail.
Jim Carrey impression of not wanting to get up from bed
We all chanted before falling into giggles giving nuzzles and affectionate rubs to one another.
“Sweetie it's good tah see yah walkin again! You recover quick like magic, did them doctors patch you up good?” Apple Bloom asked giving me a soft nuzzle of my cheek.
WHEN IS SHE GOING TO TAKE HER MEDICINE!!!
Ah think we got too much hay fer our own good!”
Are you saying you brushed the hay with your own tail!?
Cheerilee said walking toward the the mare and quickly whispering in the mare’s ear.
“Fine, I am not too busy.
“You are going to be great Sweetie, I'll see you after your assessment okay?” Cheerilee said
I even confused the hell out of her when I started talking about Quantum and String theory.
Quantum Leap reference!!
Does daddy pay for all those cosmetics and still you can't beat Silver Spoon?”
“Like, having urges to do something dangerous or wild more so than normal? Or perhaps strange things happening around you, simple things like a leaf being a different color than normal or a toy you have mysteriously missing?” she said smiling at me with a reassuring smile. I took a gulp of air, thanking whatever gods out there looking out for me that they didn't instantly figure out what I was and what I had done.
She's one of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. That's their trademark, for crying out loud!
“Tia, we can't let Discord get his claws on her you realize this, right?” Luna said softly. “We must start guiding her now otherwise she might spin wildly out of control of (if) she is exposed to that much Chaos magic.” she urged her sister.
“Sister, I think it best we take her with us to the castle have the Element of Generosity move with her, it is so we can keep a eye on both Discord’s return and Sweetie Belle for more signs. She is still in the very early stages, but eventually she might cause discourse (discord) without even realizing it is her doing it.” Luna suggested looking at the tiny filly on her sister's back.
What is it with me and waking up in random weird places? I've passed out, fallen asleep or some other form on unconsciousness like seven times now. It was annoying in that I was tried (tired) all the time, I just thanked the heavens I wasn't cranky because I would bite the head off of anything that remotely moved if I was.
So once again I open my eyes to a strange new area not know (knowing) how or why I was here. I was staring up at a high dome ceiling with long windows and the sweet smell of cotton candy and carnival food was prevalent in the air.
To (Too) many limbs to control, hell I still didn't know how to control my tail which I could see simply hung limply down over my butt. Right, I need to sort that out sooner or later. I cheated the first time when I went to the bathroom by simply holding my tail in front of me and away from myself.
Only for the door to open and I yelp (yelped) as I fell forward, smacking my nose against the hard floor. My eyes went crossed eyed as the stinging sensation of hitting your nose made me hiss, eyes watering.
“You, uh, you got tired on the way to sugar cube corner (capitalize) you just ended up passing out, so I brought you up to my room to rest! Ahahahaaa…” she trailed off which (when) I gave her a look that said I didn't believe her lie. None of these ponies were good at lying, which I guess was a good thing because being honest is a virtue.
They say that the brain actually doesn't forget anything rather the information is simply stored away as useless to the individual and is often forgotten for better information. I could recall in amazing detail of every movie, anime, cartoon, book, and field of study I knew.
“Ha ha! Is it good? I added my seventeen layer cheese and bean dip recipe into Rarity’s loco roco mucho nachos!” Pinkie said through her own bites, cheese already covering her face.
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“Miss Class a moment of your time please.” Cheerilee said
What are her greetings to her class like? Miss Class: Good morning class! Class: Good morning Miss Class!!
“Mountain climbing sounds cool, but I think we should stay in town. I got really tired just walking yesterday, so what if I nod off during mountain climbing?” I made a very soft whistle as I took my hoof slowly down to my desk making a splat noise.
I liked the chapter, it was nice to see the reaction of the teachers too. Would like to learn more about this Nexusverse.
Any story is great if Pinkie is not treated as an obnoxious crazy mare.
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its long and a little confusing I should probably make a google doc for it.
Long story short its sort of my own take on the multiverse and how it works
its why Luna and Celestia keep calling Discord a Lord of Chaos because there are a lot of them
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Yeah I guess it must be a mess haha. When you're done with the doc, I would like to read it.
Seriously one of the worst translated animes to suffer from westernization and you had to use the prime example of it.
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I had to
OMNI:Take your place on the top shelf you magnificent bastard...
And so... Sweetie make a teacher smoke...
I found the story and loved it, it's very good, and the time with Pinkie was very great
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Chaotic Good all the way baby, just crazy enough to drive a pony to the bottle and a pack of cigs
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Hey! Death was being nice and explaining things to the reader also he is under obligational rules set by the House to explain the process to newly dead souls, it's a thing in my universe long live the long winded bureaucracy! May the paper work and form signing ever be tedious!
Also thanks for letting me know the italics were messed up! and that word, I've got a proof reader now so things will get a lot better from here on out.
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Yeaaah I did, my bad I'll fix it up sometime soon
I want to read more
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Chapter 4 is done!! the last part needs to be looked over by my proof reader and it'll be up~
I hope you guys like it, I had to rewrite the first part like three times
YAY!!!
That's what happens when you take a hit to the frontal lobe.
That's what happens when you take a hit to the frontal lobe.
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Into the jaws of death, into the mouth of hell, rode the... One.
That's what happens when you take a hit to the frontal lobe.
.
Into the jaws of death, into the mouth of hell, rode the... One.
I don't know, that sounds more figurative than literal.
Those are ankles. The flank is the thigh, where it bends to correspond to the calf, whereas what people mistake for knees is called the hock, and this corresponds to the ankle on a human foot. It's really obvious if you look at the bones in a horse leg, or watch it move.
I read that as, "Miss Class looked ready to drink a cigarette," and laughed pretty hard.
Who wants to bet the language Twilight was banging her head over is regular old english?
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Someone gave me a really good idea about that, involving the warframe universe since I've mentioned it a few times~
What’s that suppose to mean?
Made me think of this...
What? What’s that suppose to mean?
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I hate mint!!
I imagine Warm Smile having a Starry night coat and horn with a yellow mane and tail.
WHEN IS SHE GOING TO TAKE HER MEDICINE!!!
Are you saying you brushed the hay with your own tail!?
Quantum Leap reference!!
She's one of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. That's their trademark, for crying out loud!
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What are her greetings to her class like?
Miss Class: Good morning class!
Class: Good morning Miss Class!!
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Is it weird or scary, the fact that I wanna see Smile and Twilight duke it out how Smile did in this chapter with her maths teacher?
ha that assesment with miss class was awesome and funny as all hell and the encounter with dimand and silver just perfect :D