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Scootaloo is now the only filly without a Cutie Mark. She still plays with Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom, but every time she is there with them, the saddening fact that she is without a Cutie Mark and can't even fly takes over her mind. On a late and rainy night with no place to go, Scootaloo is allowed inside the local bar where she meets a pony with some life-changing advice.

I decided to re-submit this due to a recent interest in the story. Seeing as to how the chapters were riddled with spelling errors and grammatical errors throughout, yet still had zero dislikes, thirteen likes, and generally good comments, I thought that a re-submission might be worth it.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

AWWWW..... :scootangel:

It would have been better if they were all one shot though. :derpytongue2:

What a very wise pony he is:scootangel:

so carols called clara now?

It says "incomplete". But at CH4 its says "The End"
WUT THE WUT?!

This is a great story. Though I can't help but feel you could have added a teeny tiny little bit more to the end. Like a final statement or thought from Hopin.

At any rate, awsome stuff here. :pinkiesmile:

Aww what a nice story. Deserves more views and readings! I loved it!

Very much better. I am glad to have read this! :pinkiesmile:

Awesome. Love your characters. :scootangel:

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