Princess Celestia, in order to better understand what exactly makes a spirit chaotic and how to stop it, chances a contract with her oldest and greatest enemy. Inside his domain and subjected to his will, she will find herself tested to the breaking point as sins of the past and hopes for the future collide in a battle of the minds that will have further reaching consequences than she could ever have imagined.
Note: So the continuity has been a bit skewed by my prolonged absence, the story splits off from the show right after the beginning of Season 2.
Cover image by Conicer
Special thanks to the Academy for editing, pre-reading, and their overall support!
Chapters (2)
So long I've waited for this. And now its here.
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A Discord and Celestia story which deals with his past without romance?!
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for the record, I like their romance but I can't wait for the next chapter.
3056284 Same here, but I've never seen this idea before.
You write a stellar Discord. Truly. I am awestruck.
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Oh my, I hope Celestia really knows what she signed up for...
But how MARVELOUS! I love this already, and I must see more soon!
What is the uploading schedule ? Do you have something in mind ?
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Weekly/Bi-weekly on Tuesdays, with bi-weekly only there in case I'm caught up in things.
Forgot to mention earlier, I appreciate all comments!
As much as I like a good physical fight, there's nothing quite like a mental battle. The subtlety and wordplay that goes into the conversation between these two is wonderful. With Celestia as the POV character, we can see the trepidation and confusion in her eyes. What I truly love, however, is how you write Discord. Though the rating of the show wouldn't give us a full view, I can read in the tone of his voice a smidgen of just how depraved he might have been pre-rehabilitation. Nice job.
I love the way you write Discord. He really manages to live up to his name without having to cause random chaos.
I don't know for sure but id say he wants to be friends. Its the easiest answer and something Celestia wrote off quickly. Love the story
Celestia your thinking way to much in this and you know better than to think discord couldn't get what he wants he could kill you in a heartbeat but he held his paw.
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I think that Discords plan is to kill himself, in a last, chaotic act, and maybe taking Celestia with him in the process. He has been trapped and stone for a thousand years, and now faces another thousand. Maybe he would rather die. Just thoughts.
Edit: pretty sad it's never gonna be finished...
My intention is snared
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