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ObeySaturnGod


Saturn's my name, writing's my game.

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Equestria has fallen. A horrific cataclysm has destroyed all semblance of life, and only one pony remains. Twilight Sparkle's last journal entry is the only remaining evidence left to describe the tragedy that has descended upon her and her friends.

Cover image by Imalou

Fanfic reading by FlameTuned

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 35 )

Hahahahahahaha....
Twilight Sparkle?
Sad?
Death?
HAHAHAHAHAA!

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NOPE.

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

384857

Aw, not even a little death?

This was... suprisingly good!!

hehe everypony died
:pinkiecrazy:

I blame the zerg. That sounds like the zerg.
Or maybe necormorphs.
Either way, Equestria got f*cked over:rainbowlaugh:

It's called Final Regrets. Once there was a Pony so magical that everypony died. The end.

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In all honesty, it was a great read. Keep it up. :pinkiesmile:

These things sounded like lich-borne. Crazy, daemonic zombie creations. Though from what I've read they collect the souls of those they kill and give them to the Lich. That would be interesting, yes?

Good story though! I liked the zombie infection journal style. They could've put up a better fight if you ask me.

Damn, if it was hell. I would have expected this guy to come out and kill ALL the demons!
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Doomguy, the only mother bucker able to defeat hell single-handedly with human weaponry!:pinkiecrazy:

384857 I can't help but notice that every comment of yours I remember reading is basically saying nothing but that you don't plan to read the story you're commenting on.

Nicely written, concise, and chilling. Getting gorier or trying to explain more likely would have detracted from the story, so I'm glad you decided to keep it fairly brief. Hope to see more from you.

385041 *ahem* The Winchesters *cough* :scootangel:

Wow. Darkest thing I've read on the site, in terms of sheer misery and hopelessness. Very well done. I'm going to go reread something involving Pinkie Pie at her zaniest to cleanse my palate.

Bloody good read mate :eeyup:
was really sorry for AJ though :ajsleepy:

Wow, that was really good, great job keeping it brief and still getting that forlorn feeling across. If zombies were about to break down my doors and this was all I had, I wouldn't be focusing on too many details either Great work!:moustache:

Awesome read!

:twilightsmile:

This is some delicious creepypasta! I loved it, Thumbs up for you :)

385121
LOLNOPE.

Cheers

~iraqlobstah

Who needs sleep? I sure as hell don't.

That was... new...? :pinkiegasp:

If only Duke Nukem came out and made everything right again...

Anyways, this was a great read. It was sad and tragic. I wasn't near tears like some fics I have read, but I did felt some sadness.

386591 No seriously. Every comment it's like "Death? Tragedy? Lol not reading this! Cheers!" Just... why bother commenting if it's a story with themes you don't want to read about?

388048
"Every comment it's like "Death? Tragedy? Lol not reading this! Cheers!"
You think every comment i make is like that. No.
I comment on it because its fun, duh.

Let the author know hes getting attention, many times i leave with
a few kind words such as some advice or some compliments.

I have read quite a few tragedy and death fics before, sometimes
the premise isn't to my liking and i comment about it. I don't ever intend
to be rude about it.

I love to do trolling, little jokes and stuff, but i never mean ill will towards an author
unless he has done the same to me directly.

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

388091 Not every comment you make, just most of the ones I come across. I guess that makes sense, I just got the impression that you were commenting for nothing else than to tell the writer that you weren't going to read their fic. Guess I misread you, my bad.

385185
Have you read Forever Faithful? Damn that story is dark.

Oh dear sweet Celestia why? :fluttercry: I felt sorry for everything the whole story. Literally everything. Even the apples.
Very well done, although I would have to say that this really takes a strike at MLP's innocence.

Despite the fact that this is really REALLY not like MLP at all, I'll grant it a thumb up because it was written nicely and the idea was... interesting. Not really something that would go in my favorites.
Reminds me of something I was working on, though.

:twilightsmile: A very good read. Dark and had alot of detail. The zombie thing was good as well and you can't blame Twilight for trying to save everyone.

Hell... like Tartarus?

I liked this story. Although my sick mind still craves gore.

Sick mind? If you think you have a sick mind then my mind is near death I scare myself by the fact that I read these stories and kind of enjoy them and it scares me (Although I think the main reason is that these fanfics usually turn into well written fics.) but any who nice job should make a sequel in which at the last minute Twi escapes that would be like bow ties cool:rainbowdetermined2:

Great story. I absolutely love the despair and hopelessness in the story. Again, great job.

"I`m sca-" I loved that last line more than anything. Anything. In all seriousness this is a great story.

was good I like zombie like storys plus its nice to see the egghead fail even at the cost of all life though I wonder as a fan why do we like causing so much pain to something we like? I like to think (though now im 2end guessing my ideas) that when a story is made a world is born one as real as ours if you think about it to us they are not real but for them they are this gos for all story's not just mlp I cant re-call line word for word but it gos along the line like this(are we the dreamer? or simple part of a dream) or if you like the line that vivi have in ff8 or nine how can you prove? we exist maybe we don't. but im just rambling on with not real point I gess sorry for wasting your time I like the story just thought id point out the idea that may hap in some world though the looking glass this or something really close to it happen :facehoof:

Wow, this story is amazing. There are the dark stories that are gore fests and then there are ones like this, the ones that you can truly feel what the character is experiencing. It is rare when I find a story this well written, one where I actually feel what the character feels. Upvote and fave.

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