• Published 1st Jul 2018
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The Ap-parent Trap - Bakmah Genesis



Celestia always dreamed of a foal. Just never expected it to be like this.

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Chapter 11

Chrysalis let a loan groan as her head throbbed. She barely remembered much of the night before, but she knew enough that she shouldn’t let Cadence take her out on any more of her parties.

“I do hate you.” said Chrysalis as she took a sip of water. Cadence stood behind her, brushing out her mane. Chrysalis let out a small growl as the alicorn hit a snag in her hair.

“You enjoyed it up until you passed out.” said Cadence, rolling her eyes. “Besides, how was I supposed to know you’d get wasted off of lust?”

“By actually asking me and finding out?” suggested Chrysalis. “I just have to hope this hangover passes enough that the wedding won’t give me more of a headache than I feel creeping on already.”

“If it makes you feel better, I heard Celestia got just as wasted, and I sure the others are no better.” said Cadence with a giggle. “I am sure that Luna and I are the only ones who won’t be battling a hangover during the wedding.”

“Good for you.” said Chrysalis. She watched as put her mane up into a tight bun, a hairstyle that she admittedly never tried. Once Cadence was finished, Chrysalis started putting on the tux that Rarity delivered earlier that morning. The tux was a normal black tux, as per usual with weddings. However, the tie was a dark red that matched with Chrysalis’ mane and eyes.

The changeling let out a sigh of relief as she buttoned up all the way, the suit fitting perfectly over the slight baby bump that she had grown. Chrysalis doubted she would get much more use out of the tux considering the size difference, but it was serving its purpose for today.

“I do have to hand it to Rarity.” said Chrysalis, examining herself in the mirror. “I somewhat doubted her ability to make this tux fit a pregnant mare.”

“There is a reason I have her custom make my dresses.” said Cadence with a giggle. “Though I have thought about commissioning some more… risque clothing from her.” Chrysalis rolled her eyes at the comment as she looked herself over once more.

“Ignoring your comment on lingerie, I should give the mare my thanks next time I have the chance.” said Chrysalis as she sat down with a sigh.

“I did wonder why you chose to be the groom.” said Cadence, brushing through her own hair. “My color choices hinged on you both wearing gowns. “

“Celestia wanted to stick with tradition.” said Chrysalis with a shrug. “I told her that she was the ruler of a country and could do what she wanted, but she wanted to keep to tradition and said the the roll of groom fit me better.”

“You have the blunt attitude of a stallion.” said Cadence, putting her man into a bun. “Blunt, stern, quite different from the more relaxed behaviors of the rest of us Princesses. It is no wonder why ponies are afraid of you.”

“You’re saying I’m scary?” asked Chrysalis, raising an eyebrow at Cadence.

“In a way.” admitted the alicorn, turning around to face Chrysalis. “Getting to know you, you can be sweet in your own way, but when you address those who you do not know personally, you come out as strict and uptight. Combined with your intimidating looks, it could come off as terrifying to some.”

“I’ll keep that in mind.” said Chrysalis dryly.


“Someone could have warned me about Pinkie Pie parties.” said Celestia with a groan. The alicorn was in a similar position as Chrysalis, battling a hangover she did not intend to give herself as Rarity wrestled to tame her mane.

“If we warned you, it wouldn’t have been a surprise party.” said Rarity, running a brush through the alicorns mane. “Though, her parties is why I now bring my own beverages to parties if I can. Hangovers are very uncouth.”

“You’re telling me.” said Celestia. The princess took another swig of her water as she hoped for her headache to calm down before the ceremony starts. “I am still not sure if I really want to go through with this.”

“I thought you really couldn’t get out of a political wedding?” asked Rarity, raising an eyebrow.

“Well, you can, but that's not what I’m talking about.” said Celestia with a sigh. “I mean telling Chrysalis how I feel. While I have started to find a friend in the changeling, somehow, I am not sure if I want to risk making this political nightmare we are in any worse than it is.”

“Oh I am sure it will be alright, darling.” said Rarity, thinkin back on her previous conversation with the changeling. “You just have to look into your and decide if this is something you want to do. I am sure it will go better than you expect it to.”

“I do wonder how you know so much about these things.” said Celestia with a chuckle.

“One too many romance novels, I am sure.” said Rarity, finishing off the braid she was constructing. “There, I will leave you to put on the dress. I am sure you will find that it fits exceptionally well.”

“I have no doubts about your talents.” said Celestia as she walked behind the changing screen.


Chrysalis took a deep breath as she stood outside the doors to the hall. It still felt like everything she was doing was unreal. In a short amount of time she was back in the same room she invaded only a few short months ago. It was unbelievable how fast everything moved, almost as if it was all being written by someone who did not understand the concept of pacing.

“Don’t look so nervous.” said Cadence, walking up behind her. “This isn’t your first wedding.”

“It's the first that was actually meant for me.” said Chrysalis with a sigh. “In all hindsight, I should have picked something less personal to invade. It would have made this a lot easier.”

“On the brightside, it looks like a good amount of ponies that aren’t nobles showed up.” said Cadence with a smile.

“Half of them are changelings in disguise.” said Chrysalis with a sigh, causing Cadence to look again. “I invited a couple, a few are here out of interest, others to make sure nothing goes wrong.”

“I’m not sure if I should be alarmed on how well they blend in or not” said Cadence, shaking her head. “I still haven’t fully realized the idea that the are hundreds of changelings walking around that I never notice.”

“Just means they are doing their job correctly.” said the queen with a smirk. “It looks like it is time for you to go up.” Chrysalis nodded to Shining Armor who was walking up to them in his formal wear.

“Then I will see you at the altar.” said Cadence with a smile. “Good luck.” Chrysalis flashed a quick smile as the mare made her up the aisle. Once she made it up there, Chrysalis would have to make the journey by herself.

As Cadence made it to her spot on the altar, Chrysalis took a deep breath before she started making her way down the aisle. As she passed them, multiple ponies gave her odd looks while the changelings had a look of happiness yet hesitation. It wasn’t everyday that a pregnant, former terrorist gets married to the Princess of Equestria.

Chrysalis let out the breath she didn’t know she was holding once she made it to the altar. She turned herself to look down the aisle, flashing a quick smile to Cadence before going back to her straight face. She jumped a little as the music started, barely enough for anyone to notice.

Escorted out by Luna, Princess Celestia made her way up the aisle. Chrysalis felt her breath hitch as she stared at the Equestrian Princess. She felt like she was a filly once again with a crush on the most popular filly.

Celestia was adorned in a beautiful long, white dress that blended perfectly with her coat. There were dashes of green that flaked in with the dress that still managed to compliment her features. Chrysalis will have to make a reminder to thank Rarity once she had the chance.

Finally, Celestia stood across from Chrysalis, giving her a warm smile. The Queen felt her cheeks burn as she returned the favor. Luna gave a slight chuckle as she took her place in between them. The Lunar Princess cleared her throat, the echo that followed gaining the full attention of the audience.

“Ladies and Gentlecolts, we are gathered here for the binding of Princess Celestia and Queen Chrysalis in marriage. For hopes of peace and coexistence.” said Luna, motioning to the two of them. “And may the two of them live on in love.”

“Now, Celestia, do you vow to support and care for Chrysalis, through highs and lows?”

“I do.”

“Chrysalis, do you vow to support and care for Celestia, through highs and lows?”

“I do.”

“Celestia, do you vow to listen to Chrysalis in her times of distress?”

“I do.”

“And do you, Chrysalis, vow to listen to Celestia in her times of distress?”

“I do.”

“Then do you, Celestia, take Chrysalis Nymphadora as your wife, till death do you part?”

“I do.” said Celestia, her smile staying true. Chrysalis could feel her cheeks heating up.

“And do you, Chrysalis, take Celestia Solar as your wife, till death do you part?”

“I do.” said Chrysalis, holding her head high. Luna gave a small smile before continuing.

“Then by the power vested in me as Princess of Equestria, I pronounce you as wife and… wife.” said Luna with a small giggle. “You may now kiss the bride.”

Chrysalis’ heart started to beat widely as Celestia leaned forward. Not wanting to delay the inevitable, Chrysalis closed her eyes with a slight squint as she met her halfway. Not wanting to linger to long, Chrysalis pulled back with a blush.

Three fillies that Chrysalis never learned the names of, despite having been at Cadence’s wedding, brought the rings up to them. Being the groom, Chrysalis took Celestia’s ring in her magic first before carefully slipping it over the Princess’ horn. She let a small smile creep on her face as Celestia did the same to her. This was the happiest she felt in a long time.

Maybe this wasn’t such a bad idea.


The reception moved out into the gardens. Toasts were made, though little was said to Chrysalis. Cadence made a joke or two about the invasion that gained a few chuckles. It became slowly obvious just how unwelcome she was.

Only a few ponies were comfortable with her. Cadence seemed to change her tune rather quickly, making Chrysalis nervous. Shining Armor was hesitant, but got over his grudges after Celestia spent an hour ripping him a new one after he was caught spying on her.

Luna didn’t require any effort to make a friend, declaring Chrysalis her best friend shortly after meeting. There were also a number of guards that she befriended. But aside from the small group, most other ponies stayed suspicious of her, waiting for her to act up.

Dinner was served and cake was cut. Chrysalis had to give it to the castle staff, the cake was the best that she had in awhile. She never got to taste the cake for Cadence’s wedding, but she almost wished she had tried to sneak a taste.

As dinner came to a close, focus was brought over to the dance floor that was built. Chrysalis was content with watching the others dance, but before anyone made their way onto it, she found herself being pushed towards it.

“The Bride and Groom dance first.” said Cadence as she shoved her onto the dance floor. Before she could protest, Celestia made her way towards her. Chrysalis gulped as she made her way over.

“I have to confess, I never did learn how to dance formally.” said Chrysalis as Celestia started to place her hooves on her.

“Then follow my lead.” said the princess with a soft smile. “And careful not to step on my hooves.”

Chrysalis silently nodded as she wrapped her hooves around Celestia. The music started to play, causing Celestia to take her first step. Chrysalis carefully mimicked her every step, trying to keep in time with the music.

“See, it isn’t so hard.” said Celestia with a chuckle. Chrysalis smiled back before biting her lip.

“Celestia, I have to something I need to tell you.” said Chrysalis with a sigh. “Over the past few months, I have found myself becoming more attracted to you. I don’t know what started it, but I started to see you as more than a friend that took me in when I became pregnant.”

“Then I should tell you that the feeling is mutual.” said Celestia warmly, nuzzling into Chrysalis’ neck. The changeling could feel her cheeks heating up as she smiled. That stupid, pink alicorn was right after all.

Author's Note:

Holy fuck I finally finished this damn thing. I'm sorry if it seems rushed and poorly written, this thing has been the literal death of me. And now the romance tag is in full swing! I am not sure how much longer this will go on, but I feel like this will end in a couple chapters. However! I do have some plans for a sequel, and will probably start on that shortly so I can have a few chapters in reserve for when this story is wrapped up. Soon we will be introduced to the newest member of the royal family.

Comments ( 41 )

“Someone could have warned me about Pinkie Pie parties.” said Celestia with a groan.

Where would the fun be in that :pinkiecrazy:

“One too many romance novels, I am sure.” said Rarity

... No such thing :ajbemused:

She felt like she was a filly once again with a crush on the most popular filly.

Pretty accurate description actually :moustache:

Maybe this wasn’t such a bad idea.

Ahh of course, can't forget the famous last words :facehoof:

I was kinda hoping someone would try to assassinate Chrysalis during the wedding

I think my heart just melted. And no Chryssi, never doubt Cadence.

Oh what a beautiful wedding that was & worth the wait too! :pinkiehappy:

of course the alicorn of love is right

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Nah. That's for after the honeymoon...

It was unbelievable how fast everything moved, almost as if it was all being written by someone who did not understand the concept of pacing.

Oh god, Chryssy is getting too meta. Someone call the meta police! Where is Discord when you need him? Oh wait, he's still a statue...
Carry on then.
P.S: Chryssy is right tough, you could really work on your pacing. But hey, every great artistic skill comes with practice. Besides this is an adorable little fic, so I can look past some errant pacing.

It does all happen a little fast. Some of the events could be built up more, but what's here is pretty good.

However, there is one thing that sticks out as inaccurate:

However, the tie was a dark red that matched with Chrysalis’ mane and eyes

Chrysalis has green eyes and hair. I'm guessing you intended to use contrasted or complement (as in "complementary colors," as opposed to "compliment," which is saying something nice).

Probably for the best they left out asking if anyone objected.

Holy fuck I finally finished this damn thing.

Wait what?
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Whew, just the marriage arc. You gave me a bad start there, don't scare a body like that!

I suppose nobody else is going to bother to bring the music? No worries, I'll do it.

Storms that's hard to listen to. Here's something better.

OH THE GOOEY FEELS OF IT ALL!

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I'm with u my friend.

As a famous author once wrote; any chimp with a typewriter can bang out the start of a story, but it's bloody hard to make a satisfying ending. Having to wrap all the loose ends, fill or hide the plot holes, and somehow make the ride worth it when you finally write, "The End".

i am finding this to be a vary good story to read it is fun , happy, with so much love.
yep this is a super good story.

Honestly it's just a bit too fast for me. That's my main complaint.

Caaaaaan you feeeeel the looove toniiiiight~

'said Rarity, thinkin back on' - thinking
'into your and decide' - into your heart and decide

'Chrysalis will have to make a reminder to thank Rarity once she had the chance' - Chrysalis would have had to make a reminder to thank Rarity once she had the chance

'to the dance floor that was built' - that had been built

KNACK 3 THA FUTURE

im loving every word of this story and cant wait to see how this goes, you my dear have a new follower and fan

Eh... Putting aside the issues with spelling at times and what seems like cases of forgotten words in certain sentences, you kinda summed up my feelings on this yourself...

It was unbelievable how fast everything moved, almost as if it was all being written by someone who did not understand the concept of pacing.

Self aware or not, you kinda skipped the whole "romance" part to this one and it felt more like they fell together cause you had characters just say they felt that way instead of having genuine interactions. As much as I hate to say it (cause I love the idea behind this), It kinda fell flat...

I like this, you are an amazing person for writing this.

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This took place over the course of a few months while they aren't head over hooves for each other it is possible for them to start falling for one another. As well as the possibility that there were a lot of momants we didn't see.

Is this dead? It feels dead :(

Just wondering if anymore chapters coming out, or is it in the backburner for a while?

Don't tell me the story is dead. :applecry:

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I don't even remember what my comment was referring to. So... Ok?

9076510
Are we going to have an update on this soon?

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Purple, I actually thought about classic black🤔

Not my kinda story but I gotta say. I find chrysalis face hilarious on the cover art!

Wish there was an update

Is this story going to continue or is it going to be cancelled I do not want it to be cancelled I want it to continue and to be finish

I really want to see more of this story

Do you know wan it Will continue

Gonna say this is dead. That sucks.

More please comrade

This deserves a rewrite it's a really good story and it has so much potential.
My only issues with this story is like three things

One Chrysalis, Chrysalis is at her best when she has an attitude or she's manipulating something. I need something I've always felt like she was too damn nice in this story, she needs to work her way up to that niceness

Two I feel like there should be more friction between Celestia and Chrysalis at the start. The more the better

Three she needs a better reason or benefit to even tell the princesses that she's having a kid. it never made sense to me cuz she gets nothing out of this really

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I'm not sure what you mean by "benefit" you think that Chrysalis as a well experienced mother would really feel right just "dealing" with this? Idk, I think she did what made sense to do in terms of coming to the other parent and letting her know. Things would've been much more difficult if she hadn't.

Chrysalis took a deep breath as she stood outside the doors to the hall. It still felt like everything she was doing was unreal. In a short amount of time she was back in the same room she invaded only a few short months ago. It was unbelievable how fast everything moved, almost as if it was all being written by someone who did not understand the concept of pacing.

Yeah... almost... :duck:

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