Our Last Goodbyes

by finesthour

Author's Note

This story would not be a reality right now if it were not for my good friend Parties Like Pinkie, over at Mlpforums.
He is my editor, and got my fic to look pretty c:

The whole idea behind this fic was because I had a dream about this very subject. My inspiration came from my good friend Scootacool over at Mlpforums as well. I wouldn't of wrote anything without him.

Picture from:
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/355/d/3/sad_pinkamena_by_bloodsiri-d4jrrki.png

Editor:
http://mlpforums.com/user/3525-parties-like-pinkie/

Thank you all for reading my fiction, and I really hope you enjoyed it!

Comments

[finesthour]

997922
Clifff hanger, hanging from a cliiiiff..

And that's why they call him cliff hanger!

[Fleeting Song]

I feel you deserve a compliment. I don't exactly know how I found this story, but I do know it was very thought-provoking and well written. You're a very good writer.
Cheers.

[Archive_Anon]

I'm surprised this isn't more popular. While the writing is rather flawed with several things being repeated through alternative wording in quite a few places, I still absolutely enjoyed the story. When I read fanfictions I don't expect a professional level of writing, but it seems many do. Sad that they miss out on some wonderful stories just because they don't like how it's written.

Great story all around. It's not a tear jerker but it gets the feels going, which is nice. 8/10 from me :)