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Nightfall, you are a moron. WHat did you expect. Everythign was covered and your chosen love asked for it. it's her fault. if you can't deal with her getting hurt. THEN WHY MAKE THE PATROL AT ALL! Storm isn't the only one needing a school of hard knocks wake up call.
Is there a chance Reaper will show up in the story. Also i 'm freaking living this story.
by beating the shit outta ‘em hell yea!!!
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ey some1 has the same thought process
I think the dual would have been better if after Dawn was saying goodbye after helping heal Storm, Storm would be all like, "wait," and would get up on her hooves, bones squeakin' and all while they settled and adjusted, and would shake hooves with Twilight.
Or... is it to early for character growth?
The word "just" is capitalized.
Weather... unless I'm wrong. Which is totally possible.
Forgot the period.
Wouldn't it be loser obeys the winner?
I can't keep quite any longer Charred Salamander sounds alot like Natsu Dragneel in this chapter whereas in his debut chapter made him descriptive of a Charmander add to that main characters name is Dawn I'm guessing MD likes Pokemon and Fairy Tail
Ah, the classic Motivator lives on!
Ouch, brutal.
Well, Night really lets emotions get in the way.
Mega ultra b*tch!
'"As you wish." Storm said as they left, then looked at Dawn. "How far do I take this?"" - I think you meant Stonewall to say this?