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Since I'm using sites that allow me to like individual chapters it's odd opening a chapter and being unable to show my appreciation for it through a simple click, so I shall put my thanks for more chapters here. Thank you, it was a great chapter and I quite enjoyed many of the interactions.
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Thank you. I'm not sure why this comment of yours is speaking to me so much this morning (I'm blaming the HRT) but I appreciate your comment in kind. The story so far had started out when we first worked on this project as an undirected 'let's see what would happen when they meet' into something more substantial as we both began to crave a plotline for the story. This is the beginning stages of it and while I anticipate some disappointments on a personal level (not putting spoilers in), the different conflicts and progresses to the finale will be quite interesting, that I can promise you (and all the readers).
St’s getting real. Looks like we’re getting into the meat of the story, and judging by the pacing it’s goig to be a long one
It should be “I couldn’t care less”. While not grammatically incorrect, it’s kind of a redundant statement. I could care less about ice cream, I could also care less about cars. I could care more about both of them.
shit just got real up in he’
That's kinda dangerous, if somebody copies Twilight's voice, they could try to take control of Chryssie.
Well, now we know where this world's Dawn went.
'To dangerous for the dungeons' - Too
'It was ever session' - every
'Twilught' - Twilight
'taking a form looking stand' - not sure what you meant there
'guardsponies voices' - guardsponies' voices
'habe' - have
'heading towards the door forgetting the evidence even exists in comparison' - door, forgetting the evidence even existed.
'over to dawn suspiciously' - Dawn
'it didn't help starlight was influencing her' - Starlight
'have i not trained you' - I
'rather then helping it' - than
'It took the other worlds, military almost 13 years to finally capture him' - other world's military
'toward chrysalis as she' - Chrysalis
'does she not like that i talked' - I
'when I'm using my link' - I'm
'that i'm using magic' - I'm
'refused do to her upbringing' - due to
'isn't exactly some ponies do' exactly what some
'didn't arrive do to random weakness' - due to