When Rainbow Dash found an old and worn out muscle car, she decided to try and repair it. But of course, since Rainbow Dash likes to rush everything, the vehicle was most likely not going to last long. But there's only one way to find out, right? Join the mane six from the Equestria Girls Universe in a long and dangerous road trip, and adventure inspired by many 80's car movies.
Movies such as The Wraith, Mad Max, Dukes of Hazard, Duel, and many more.
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"A Bumpy Start" is right. You have the makings of a really fun story here, but structurally, this needs a lot of work. You have random double spacing throughout the story between paragraphs. Dialogue between characters should not be italicized, and the whole thing could use a once over with a spell checker.
Also, if this is meant to be the canonical Equestria Girls universe, where's Sunset Shimmer? If she doesn't exist in this story, the AU tag may be appropriate.
That said, I think you do have something worthwhile here. If you take some time to polish it up, this could be a fun little adventure.
There are quite a lot of typos and some of them seem consistent (like "worse" and "worst" being written as "wrost"). But the plot seems to be shaping up nicely.
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Yeahhh I think I better use the quote things.
And more characters might appear or not. I'm still developing the story after all. And thanks. I better polish it up. A lot-
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Thanks! And yeah, I'll fix those typos.
Frigging keyboard sometimes just messes up. That and the fact I am from another country.
When was the last time I found a story on this site with a car in it? Liked, faved and tracked.
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Woah, thanks, pal!
Heh, don't worry, Rainbow Dash's old muscly won't be the only car on the story. ^^
I am now saddened to know that this story will never be completed.