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(Reposted) A new school year has started at CHS. The main 7 have graduated and are on their way to college. However, the Earth is in danger once more. Only this time the danger isn't from Equestria, it's from the evil space pirate Daegon. With the main 7 gone, it's up to a new team of heroes to stop them: they are the Power Rangers Noble Force.

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Comments ( 34 )

Ok, color me intrigued.

An EQG Tokusatsu Fanfic with three of my five favorite characters? And it is actually pleasant to read? After the Power Rangers Fic I have been reading until now finished a month ago?

Yep, keeping an eye on that one.

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Thank you! And if you have an idea for a monster of the week, just PM me, I'd really appreciate it

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To be honest, I kinda need the monsters of the week myself :twilightblush:

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Ok then. Just know this, the ranger theme for this team is based around knights

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Hmm Knights, interesting them, can‘t await the horse riding Megazord :trollestia:

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Also, you said three of your five favorite characters are in here? Which ones? If you don't mind me asking

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Sure: My favorite Scootaloo, second favorite Spike who nearly always gets shafted in these storys and fourth place Starlight

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Ah, cool. I'm going to laugh if I somehow get the other two :)

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Well Rainbow and Rarity already appeared so there is that :rainbowlaugh: they apparently are just not regulars

When is the next chapter coming out?

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It would be out sooner if I weren't stuck on a certain part

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Hopefully it won’t cause a big issue later on. BTW I really love how this story started out and I can’t wait for the morph and theme I know it’s gonna be awesome!

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You’re welcome. And may the Power protect you!

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You know I’m actually curious about who the 6th Ranger is going to be.

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Well, be even more curious because there's going to be 7 rangers by the end of this! :raritywink:

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7 Rangers?! Ok I’m super excited for this story! I love it when there’s more than six Rangers. The more Rangers the better! You just earned yourself a follower! 👍🏻

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Feel free to guess their identities and colors

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For the identities I’m gonna guess Apple Bloom and Button Mash. And for the colors Gold/Silver and Green. What do you think?

Comment posted by TheMegaPonyRanger deleted Aug 28th, 2018
Comment posted by TheMegaPonyRanger deleted Aug 28th, 2018

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Mostly? So I got most of the guesses right? Which ones are correct?

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the identities and the first color (silver)

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WOW! I didn’t know that I would get both identities right. I just assumed I got one identity correct guess I got lucky. Man this story is gonna be so cool! You have my support man! Take your time!

This was an awesome chapter! And I’m so glad that I helped!

Well, the dead rise from the graves apparently :rainbowlaugh:

By the way, you forgot the "t" in Part 3

I kind of like it,

I heard worse.

So, the fate of the world rests in our hands? Cool!

Well, I hope you can stand for Justice... I'll see myself out.

"Riiight…" Scootaloo trailed off, "Hey, steakhouse, what do you think you're doing?" she shouted at the monstrous bull.

You have its attention, roll initiative

Vealer snapped his fingers, causing a huge group of creatures to appear. They were red creatures with parts of their metallic rib cages showing.

Ok, so people in red spandex with metallic ribcages, got it.

Spiritual Source, Noble Force!

Sounds fine enough.

Their morphing sequence consisted of them standing on a cliff and leaping from it. As they fell, they performed a flip which made their suits appeared, landing on one knee superhero style. When they stood up, their helmets then appeared on their heads.

...Ok, in my opinion, this just doesn't work. This is not a visual medium, the best way to make a transformation sequence is to make it not too flashy and to make it feel like it doesn't take you out of the action. Aka, no describing of backgrounds and usage of simple stuff like light or other natural phenomena like tornados, or even something like a holographic image covering the rangers.

I got a morning star

I know who I'm not standing next to...

"Gahh!" Vealer yelled as he landed on his back, "NOOOOO!" he screamed as electricity surrounded his body, before blowing up in a fiery explosion.

well, that was easy...

"Is that so? And here I thought getting the spirit gems from a low-class planet such as this would be easy" Daegon said, his hands in front of him in a serious, thinking position, "Never thought I'd have to use this. Unleash the genome reorganizer!" he commanded his crew.

Time to go big or go home.

"Looks like the steaks have been raised!" the giant version of Vealer said with a pun.

... You don't have to tell me that that was a pun

(again, ironic)

Something like this does not belong in a text. If it is ironic and you managed to write that people will get it anyway.

"Rangers, I give you your Noblezords"

I expect an explanation for that later.

"Gahh! I'm well done!"

See, a pun without pointing it out.

I'm sorry, Rumble, but you can't tell your brother. In fact, you guys can't tell anyone at all

Why? It's pretty much up to them to decide who they trust with that knowledge. I agree, they shouldn't shout it out, but to family, why keep it a secret?

The gems are still embedded within them, but now your sisters won't be able to tell. Plus, you can now use them to communicate with me and with each other

:facehoof: Ok, time to unpack that stupidity... They are going to try and hide that from AJ and Rarity? Why? They know about the gems, Sunburst trusted them enough to let them test it, so why not trust them with this now? Not like they could be useful allies or something, oh wait.

Oh, that's simple. I just—

I don't know if I should be angry or amused by this. On second thought, this is important backstory for the Zords, not just a simple color swap, you don't get to do that here.

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Yeah, I didn't really plan out some of this stuff, I just wrote what came at the top of my head. As for the Sunburst not letting them tell their families or friends, if they did tell them, their lives might be put in danger. As for not letting them tell their sisters, do you really think Rarity and Rainbow Dash would be ok with be ok with their little sisters putting their lives at risk doing something this dangerous?

Also, do you have any ideas for a monster that the rangers can fight?

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As for the Sunburst not letting them tell their families or friends, if they did tell them, their lives might be put in danger.

Their lives are already in danger if they tell them or not doesn't make a difference either way.

As for not letting them tell their sisters, do you really think Rarity and Rainbow Dash would be ok with be ok with their little sisters putting their lives at risk doing something this dangerous?

And you think that Sunburst could keep that secret for any significant time, first he is a doormat, second the girls aren't stupid, they know of the gems, they can put two and two together. It won't take 24 hours till they are going to start asking uncomfortable questions. Keeping that a secret is a pipe dream if I ever saw one.

Also, do you have any ideas for a monster that the rangers can fight?

Like I said a few months ago, I need thous myself.

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Right. I guess I see your point. I mean, I was going to have them know eventually anyway, but not for a while. And don't worry, I plan to have Sunburst explain how he created the zords in the next chapter.

And the morphing sequence wasn't that bad, the disney era ranger morphing sequences (Wild Force to RPM) had backgrounds to them.

Also, do you have a Discord account? If you do, maybe you can help me plan out this story better.

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Right. I guess I see your point. I mean, I was going to have them know eventually anyway, but not for a while. And don't worry, I plan to have Sunburst explain how he created the zords in the next chapter.

We'll see.

And the morphing sequence wasn't that bad, the disney era ranger morphing sequences (Wild Force to RPM) had backgrounds to them.

There is just a big difference between a visual medium like a TV-series and a fanfiction. What works in one does not work in the other, like describing a camera shoot. Something like this just doesn't work here.

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Ah. Again, I see your point. And you didn't answer my other question

Okay here's a prediction Button Mash is going to be the golden six Ranger and is Zord is going to be a dragon and his weapon is going to be a axe that turns into a gun, am I right because it would be awesome if I got like one of those right.

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