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Rescue Sunstreak


Rescue Sunstreak at your service.

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This was my entry to the EFNW 2018 Iron Author writing competition. As always with my short stories it is stand alone, however to know who the characters really are, you would be best served reading the main Ponyville Fire Department story.

It is Crash's big day, two years of training under Chief Sunstreak. This was his true desire, not just being a firefighter but to make the grade as Inspector. Could he pass the test, could he show he had what it took?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Okay, this was interesting, but honestly, I think given all the buildup, this feels like a part of a chapter to a much larger story really. Like we're only seeing a bit of picture, you know what I mean?

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OH exactly, it is just that. It makes references to the last few chapters of PVFD and first chapter of PVFD: New generation

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That's sorta the problem though, it would be better off in those stories, not as a one-shot.

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