Ex-army ranger Aaron is sent to Equestria after his untimely death. His body on earth was so mangled that he didn't have a choice, go to Equestria or be stuck in limbo for 50 years. He took option A. But when his arrival makes him seem like a threat, he will now be chased through hell and back by the ponies that he loved. How will the hero deal with the fact that Discord is rearing his ugly head. And how exactly did Celestia know what a human was?
This is a serious toned story, not one of my poor attempts at comedy.
Chapters (4)
Nice job on the first chapter keep up the good work
Aw shit son, it's about to get real! Well, good first chapter, I like the fight scenes.
Also, when Humans are made to be the antagonists of ponies, make him seem unfazed and good hearted. It gives the reader a kind of 'wtf pony people?!' to the audience, seeing that the man is a good person, and is actually not hostile. Unless provoked. I hope to see more soon, and good luck.
FIRST. Damn, missed it.
holy shit....
979676>>979680>>979701
Thank you guys for the positive feedback. Its good to know I can at least wright one average story.
979680 I agree with what you said.
Oh shit, that unlucky dude better fucking haul ass.
finally! take that, The Third! a story about pony-human bias that can update!
980603
Um... sure. I don't understand your comment but okay. If you mean regular chapters than yes due to the fact this isn't a piece of shit like said othere stories.
980608
sorry.i was talking about a story similar to this that hasn't updated in a year.
980611
Ah! Well, I will probably work and finish chapter two tomorro- I mean today if that makes you feel better.
979680 I agree with what you said.
This is pretty rushed. And you either need to go over your writing more or get a pre-reader.
A sort of interesting idea for a story, but it could have been written better.
Also, the word is 'hospital', not 'hospitable'.
How'd you get those two words mixed up???
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Thank you for your imput! Weather you realize it or not, it's really critics that make the story. I was desperately hoping someone was going to give me the negatives about the story so I could see what I did wrong so I can fix it next chapter. I don't care if you like it or not, you actually helped me by being a total ass.
Very, VERY good. I hope for an update soon. Keep up the good work
if reading was a drug i would have overdosed by now
well one more story to the favorites
hmmm this will end wonderfully cant wait to see how this develop
983627
I don't mean to be harsh. Sorry if it seemed like it.
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You weren't. I meant that being harder on the story is a good thing, maybe I should have been a little nicer with my wording.
Well done
i wouldnt blame the main character if he did go around and start to do crazy shit i mean after a welcoming like that i think everyone would want a little revenge
i like HiE, but you started the Equestria life off like shit. 'MUST. KILL. HUMAN. BEEP. BOOP.'
1028392
Sorry, I just Derped
wow, this has potential, but it just got really fuckin' stupid
1029502 Um.... Okay? Sorry you didn't like it.
Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
983627
You should check out your description.
"Ex-army ranger Aaron is sent to Equestria after his untimely death. His body on earth was so mangled that he didn't have a choice, go to Equestria or be stuck in limbo for 50 years. He took option B. But when his arrival makes him seem like a threat, he will now be chased through hell and back by the ponies that he loved. How will the hero deal with the fact that Discord is rearing his ugly head. And how exactly did Celestia know what a human was?
This is a serious toned story, not one of my poor attempts at comedy. "
If he took option 'B' that means he's stuck in limbo for 50 years. So I assume you meant option 'A'.
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Well, i feel retarted. thanks for pointing that out.
1062780
No problem.
What's up with Celestia and always hating humanity. It's really old by now.
1065103
She doesn't always hate humanity, she just happens too in this particular story.
Woo hoo! New chapter; Keep ''em coming
YES YES new chapter
been waiting for awhile now and nice chapter 
Sweet!
Oi, if you make him a pony, I will hunt you down and beat you to death with your own dismembered arms!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOooooOOOoooooOOOO sorry for the delay bro, i was like... y'know... busy.... stuff.... own fanfic.... too popular for own sanity...
with our luck they probably got an amalgamation of hitler and skeletor
Reminds me of that movie, the Grey I think.