This story is a sequel to Applejack, I Can Explain!
The Apples are practically the model of a happy earth pony family. Three foals, a happy couple, and a grandmother who's still spry enough to help with the harvest. Heck, they're even talking about getting a puppy.
But nothing lasts forever, especially not tranquility. Extra-especially not when a mother goes looking through her older daughter's closet.
Rated Teen for mild to medium innuendo. Written for Tumbleweed's Springtime Sequel-Slash-Sandbox Switcheroo contest for Alaborn.
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Okay, this was sweet. I find myself looking forward to any future sequels.
Also, FIRST!
It's always nice to see one's story ideas appear in a later episode. The staff writers say they don't read fanfiction, but we know better.
Nice to see where Applejack picked up that recipe.
... Oranges?
Nice bit of drama with some humor mixed in.
Oh this is so heartbreaking and sweet. Very good!
Durian?
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Silly Farsan, that's a batpony thing!
Sweet, funny too. I can see it happening. :)
That was beautiful. Loved the exploration of Pear Butter and Bright Mac, and you managed to make the original story make sense with subsequent canon.
I also really liked that you didn't draw out the joke longer than it needed to be.
That's so sweet. I love it.