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Mylittleponyfan


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Spike is having trouble falling asleep, no matter how he twists and turns in his little bed. So he wakes Twilight up to help him get to sleep. Despite Twilight's many suggestions, Spike just cannot go to sleep. Finally, Twilight sings him a lullaby to help him sleep.

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Aww this is cute. :)

As sweet as this was, it would've been perfect if Twilight suddenly couldn't sleep after helping Spike get to sleep.

8840242 You are very welcome.

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Can you picture Twilight singing that to him?

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I suffer from a mild case of schadenfreude (the condition not the memelord pony) so little things like that are highly amusing to me.

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Twilight Sparkle is such a good mother.

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I have a feeling, Twilight sings very beautiful.

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Comment posted by Mylittleponyfan deleted Apr 7th, 2018

8848687 I mean I think it would be great if the show continued to air after season 9. Right now they might transition to generation 5 after season 9 airs. However I would like generation 4 to keep running for a while.

Comment posted by LyraAlluse deleted Apr 7th, 2018

I liked the interactions, but it would have been good if there had been a scene in the morning with Spike well rested and Twilight half asleep, overall I thought it was great!

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Just a thought. To make it even more interesting. It is still cool, but a scene like that would add interest.

Decent enough story, though I have to wonder why it's marked as incomplete. Doesn't seem like there's more to do with it.

Comment posted by Mylittleponyfan deleted Apr 9th, 2018

Nice, decent story! Like I said before it's got the character's down perfectly, albeit the story itself is a bit short- but that's really fine! Of course more flavor would spice up and lengthen the story it's still a great pass time and absolutely adorable!

Someone requested I read this for a video...so I just finished reading this on my first attempt of a livestream

Loved it 👍

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