One fine morning, Twilight Sparkle and Spike set out for a walk outside. Just then, Discord shows up to ruin their day.
As quite expected, Discord pulls some of his mischievous pranks on Twilight and Spike. From the beginning, Twilight is immediately annoyed, but she does her best to keep putting up with Discord and his antics. It would seem it is going to be like this for the rest of the day.
Will Twilight be able to tolerate him any further?
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Sequal!
The same goes for you.
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LOL
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Celestia scolding Twilight about her behavior.
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Twilight is punished.
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I see.
This is a very good one-shot. I can't get over Twilight beating the sh*t out of Discord.
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So ya like it?
Two need help, like SERIOUS help, or just get a nuke and nuke her. Either way she will be in piece(s)
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Why?
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I dunno, if she's the "person with the crown" instead of the necklasses, she should have more self-control
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Never. In this story, she is herself: A princess-less unicorn living with Spike in the Golden Oak Library.
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I know and I wasn't implying that she had wings, that's why I said crown instead of alicorn...
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She is #NotMyPrincess.
You know, although the way Twilight acted seemed a little out of character, I gotta say that something like this needs another chapter or maybe a sequel. Like, just Discord getting beaten the shit out of and no part of the story went back on that to show that if he's okay or not or is he just pulling some sort of trick making Twilight look bad, I don't really feel satisfied with it. But I think it's a really great story thus far. I don't really get why so many people disliked it. Maybe it was because of the out of character Twilight or maybe it was because Discord, the guy with the chaotic powers, can't protect himself from a pwetty whittle puwpe unicouwn, but hey, to me it didn't matter or bother me much and it was actually interesting. Are you planning on making a sequel? Or maybe add another chapter? I mean, I know you tagged this story as 'completed' but, maybe you could add another chapter just to see how the characters are?
Sorry for the long comment, BTW.
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I will think about it. Also, if you do any Discord stories, have him speak far less contractions in his vocabulary from now on.
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I am currently making a new story about him. Annnnd, yea. Contraction in vocabulary is something that happens often in my writings. Specially for dialogs and such. Have you read any?
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Oh. Well, just wanna let you know that the fic was great and hope you make a sequel.
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I may or may not.
Everyone has a breaking point.