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Flash Notion


The hardest part about writing is that nothing you make is ever as good on the page as it was inside your head... but other people don't know that, so we worry over nothing.

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Trixie Lulamoon wakes up in a strange place, her memories a jumble. Escaping is paramount. But is she really in danger? What about the other ponies in this place? Things aren't quite what they seem, and the truth may be the biggest trap of all.

Written for Tumbleweed's Springtime Switcheroo.

Through some fairly convoluted logic, inspired by this story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390405/selfless

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

I can so see that shithead do something that cruel, too.

8885324
thanks for reading! but ah... was calling starlight names really more important than pointing out my giant formatting error 2/3 of the way through? fixed now. (I say it to you because you are the first comment, so yay for you!)

8885489
Well, to be fair, I didn't notice it. So yes, it was more important. :p

8885492
huh. really would've thought people would notice a chunk of italics in the wrong place. weird. at least I caught it in the end.

Did you win the contest?

8908998
... uh, it wasn't technically a contest. there was no proper prize.

This is kinda dark... love it.

And I just realized that my profile pic perfectly reflects, Trixie in this fic.

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