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Flash Notion


The hardest part about writing is that nothing you make is ever as good on the page as it was inside your head... but other people don't know that, so we worry over nothing.

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Starlight's been living in Ponyville a while now. She's come a long way from being a tyrannical, cutie mark-stealing dictator. She's made friends, won battles, and learned a lot from Twilight. She's even gotten used to the strange being known as 'Pinkie Pie'.

At least, she thought she had.

A dumb one-shot I probably should've put more thought into, but didn't because whatever. I :heart: :pinkiesmile:

"Other" tag is for minor characters who are mentioned but are otherwise unimportant.

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That was delightfully silly :D

I enjoyed this, not having seen very much interaction between Pinkie and Starlight. It makes sense for Starlight to be sort of annoyed by Pinkie, kinda like Twilight and Dash when they first met her.

After so much time in this fandom, though, I think I've been burned out on the whole "Pinkie acknowledges the fandom/series" brand of humor. There are other ways to make Pinkie spontaneous, random, and funny without being quite so meta. (Note: I'm not saying this brand of humor is bad, or that you should stop, or even that I didn't enjoy it. Just that there are other paths to explore).

I wish you would've spent just a touch more time on this. It was good, but lacking in something. It needed a bit more time in the oven, so to speak

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