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Caddy Finz
We're screwed and life will never get better...but in the meantime, get your free pony garbage over here!
Caddy Finz
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The terrifying thing is...this can really and has happen, because someone in a hurry.
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That's why I started writing this as sort of a PSA. Sorry it took so long for me to reply by the way
Alright, if you're gonna take back a like you gave before, at the very least give a reason!
Tough crowd...if someone would just speak up and tell me what's wrong with it, maybe I could fix it. That requires communication on your end, everyone.
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I've had comments deleted because authors didn't like me calling out their mistakes, so I'd assume the culture here is blind praise and silent criticism. *shrug*
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I'd rather people tell me how a story can be improved that to just slap a dislike on it and call it a day 
How can I expect to improve as a writer if nobody sets any bars for me? If you scroll through comment sections on my other work, I think you'll find plenty of untouched comments with constructive criticism. 
I welcome that shit with open hooves 
Stifling criticism? Blind praise? On MY stories? Aw helllllll no!
Just a little tidbit. My mother actually used to be a school bus driver since I started high school (current graduate) and I SHIT YOU NOT this was a common occurrence. So much that our dispatch had all the buses filled with traffic violation papers and front facing cameras to help identify those who break our traffic stops.
Just some info. Chucking this into my read later cause still debating if I want to read it plus I'm busy lately
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See, I actually started writing this as a PSA of sorts, the idea just hit me when I saw some dick blow right past a school bus! I know it's really hard to get people to like something but I hope you'll give it a chance! If you do, thanks in advance, if you don't, thanks for commenting regardless 
Oh, I hope you DO read and enjoy it!
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What's sad is that I actually saw CLASSMATES blowing the traffic stops
So did that pegasus come to her senses and realize that telling somepony to kill themself is practically murder of an indirect kind? Or is this somepony else? We shall see. These stories have a way of serving as both a PSA about safety and a cautionary tale about holding grudges at the same time.
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I plan on both the former AND the latter to be a lesson in this story. I hope you enjoy it and keep reading as I think you'll be pleasantly surprised later on! Oh, and the pegasus telling her to kill herself the first time was actually said directly to her and the second time, it was echoing through Creampuff's mind. It was just pushing her towards the idea that much further. The voice behind her is somepony else who she never expected to see. Read on after my next installment and you'll find out. Now I need to go to bed and sleep off this vodka before I come back and keep editing and adding stuff to my comments again.
I don't usually read this kind of story and honestly I don't know why I tried it, other than perhaps to hate it.
But I don't. I like it. I like it quite a lot.
It's well written and I appreciate the deep emotion that lives in it.
I look forward to reading the future chapters. Keep up the good work!
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You went in thinking that it wouldn't be good and by the sound of it, came away pleasantly surprised? Thank you for telling me that, my friend, I genuinely appreciate it! 
I'm absolutely thrilled that I could exceed your expectations!
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But the dislikes gotta stop pouring in sooner or later. I guess it's a love it or hate it kinda story. I wish people had the courage to tell me what's wrong with it. Not like I'm gonna reach through your monitor and smack you or anything.
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I expect most of the dislikers haven't even tried it. They probably looked at the tags and the description and just decided to hate it without giving it a chance, probably thinking it's just some edge drama about a jerk getting punished.
That's not the case, though. The protagonist is actually a good pony who made a very bad, stupid decision with terrible consequences. There is not a single ounce of maliciousness in her heart, and in fact she is the very picture of heart-wrenching wretchedness and regret.
The same cannot be said for the other ponies of this quaintly evil little Stephen King town. They are at first understandably outraged, but this rapidly becomes a force of collective unforgiving maliciousness that reaches outright terrifying proportions. The things they do and say to her are so incredibly vile and wicked that one cannot help but sympathize with the deepening plight of the persecuted girl and her family. She's become a victim too, a pathetic outcast chased to the edge by the increasing viciousness of her own former community.
If you can read this and not feel pity for her, I imagine you may have something in common with the monsters in her town.
I am very interested to see what happens next.
Okay...... Now I'm actually interested.
Granted I want to burn that prision down and kill every fucking guard in there. What they did was HIGHLY ILLEGAL!!
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Ah, so I was able to invoke such emotion and passion from you through my writing? Glad to hear that, feel free to leave a like if you haven't already
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Dude. This story has a connection to me. I spent my middle and high school years helping with bus drivers and to see how one incident can have a downward spiral is what infuriates me. Yes she ran the kid over but it technically is her friends fault as well. If they didn't pester her to hurry up then she wouldn't of ran over that kid. Or forever be scarred by it including by a corrupt prision system. Not to meantion to be harassed by local police and the kicked out of business where they could recieve revenue. And ponies telling her to kill herself?! News flash you townfolk dumbasses!: if she did you all would be held accountable cause her family could sue everyone for harassment and assisting a suicide. Not to mention her friends should take partial blame for the kids death cause they made her get to them faster.
Also I might be asking to much but could I be a part of this story? My OC could have a garage where Creampuff can work at and he might hace some footage from his mother's bus route where at least half the town did similar traffic stop violations as Creampuff did, actually with sime almost hitting foals.
Just saying it wouldn't be fair for a town to hate her if half of them did the exact same thing with almost the same results.
If you have this thing already planned out then I won't beg. But it would help your PSA more if half the town has their own mistakes....
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Also to Speedy (my OC) his mother is a retired bus driver so when Creampuffs case came on the news she wasn't supirsed. Hell she told Speedy "I figured something like this would happened eventually."
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Though I hate to let others down, I already have the remainder of the story planned out. Sorry about that 
Regardless though, I'm always open to suggestions and constructive criticism.
You have some very insightful input and as always, I appreciate it very much.
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Thats okay. I'm fine with hiw it is so far.
Are you NUTS?!?!?!
No no, bad idea
!
STOP THE BUCKING CAR!!!
Lime...what did you just do
?!?!
Oh no...
.
You seriously do not
.
You should always let the bus stop and let the kids cross before you even think about passing
.
Can't say I blame her...
.
No...
.
No...it's not...but that doesn't make what happened any less true
!!!
Oh boy, this is so not good
!
Jackasses
.
Wow, she must be one extraordinary mare if she can do that
.
Thank you Ironclad
.
Poor Creampuff...
.
Now that was one scary dream...
. Things will only get worse form here
.
Wait...is that...
? It can't be...
.
After finishing this chapter, I now view this story as being in the same large room of unrelentingly gut-punching sadness as the movie Requiem For A Dream... and that’s saying a lot, because that movies’s depressing as hell.
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Because *sniff* if you don't...then I understand 
Does that mean you didn't like it?
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Actually, I did like it... a lot. Sure wasn’t cheerful, but some opposite-like part of me finds a rather morbid enjoyment from reading sad stories.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter may or may not give you a break from the constant depressing stuff. Now if only that like/dislike bar would go in my favor...
Five stars to Clutzy for not holding anything against Creampuff
.
You need it Cream, you really, really do
.
Nice to see these two already bonding
!
That would make sense...not all kids or ponies bloom at 13
.
Laughter is the best medicine after all, and that's what Creampuff needs
.
That's probably the more smarter and wiser thing to do
.
Let's just hope that it doesn't go to as nearly as much shit as it did last time
.
can't wait for the next chapter! really love this story so far. keep up the good work!
I starting to like this fic. I hope some of the dislike read this again so they can give it a chans. Hope you continue this fic.
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Thanks, I hope so too. No one traumatizes ponies like Gaston
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Hehe yeah.
Just dropping you a comment to say don't let the up/down vote bar get you down. There are a lot of people on this site that will just look at the tags on a story and immediately down vote.
I find your handling of the subject manner to be respectful and the protagonist to be believable. The idea of a little ghost boy that raids panty drawers did me a giggle.
Keep up the good work. I'll keep on reading.
I gave rhis a like and a favorite to give you motivation to write more.
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I plan to continue this story, along with others that I'm working on and plan on starting in the future. I just need to take a break and clear my mind while I search for wild game animals to blow away with my new 20 gage 
Once hunting season is over, I'll be right back in the saddle 
It won't be super long until I unveil some other works in progress that I think you guys will like 
Thanks a lot, friend!
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I'd take it either hunting season was extended past December or house buying is difficult?
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The latter, my friend. I'm so sorry I haven't been active, I know you and so many others are looking forward to reading more into my stories. I should be moved in and have my internet set up at my new home within a couple of weeks. When things finally calm down and the dust settles, I should be able to get some writing done.
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It's fine man. Take your time to get everything settled
Yay. A update. On 4th of July no less.
I'm starting to get very suspicious of this little cool thing Clutzy likes doing
.
That was Tartarus
. No, more like it was Hell
.
Okay, I have to admit, that was pretty funny
.
Uh-oh
!!!
Oh crap, no ponies are going to think she's going insane
!!!
...well, that...went a lot better than I thought
.
I'm kind of at a loss for words too
. Still I'm glad there's at least one kind pony here
.
Crap
.
And, inevitably, there is a debate on whether not holding Creampuffs unintentional crime against her is right or wrong
.
Clutzy has a point you know
. You really should see a therapist
.
You really need it
.
SHIT
!!!
It looks like their conscience is finally starting to get to them
.
Yeah...super slide
.
She's really not
.
I highly doubt she'd want to do that with ponies who originally threw hatred towards her but...it's her choice
.
Keep on guard Cream
.
Worse than you already are
.
Thank you Clutzy
.
Probably not...unless he goes into your drawer again
!!!
O/////O.
She's really not
.
Maybe not this...
. And that's kind of the problem, sometimes young children telling parents about their problems doesnt always go well...they say they won't judge, but when they hear it, the exact opposite happens
.
I am cringing so hard right now
.
Well things are looking up slightly...but I know things are gonna get worse
.
Glad to see it's not dead
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Yup, this story's back! I decided to take my Mom's advice and focus on one story at a time as to avoid burning myself out and having a stroke. At this point, I have a much better idea of the direction I want to take it. Enjoy.
So uhh...feel free to leave a like as to hopefully offset the onslaught of dislikes that keep pouring in.
I like to think I don't suck THAT hard. 
I bet it'd turn right around if I made it a clopfic...not that I'm going to.
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Screw it, I'll keep making it specially for those who DO like it. I'll drink to that.
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I found this story by accident, and I'm glad I clicked on the link. This story does have too many dislikes for the type of story it is, but I think that makes it stand out more. Having struggled with mental illness I've taken to liking this story not for the content within, but for the struggle of the main character. I like it, it has good composition and I'm looking forward to the next parts.
Glad to see this is still going.
Maybe Creampuff will get the itch to welcome the possibility of finding mr. right once her other issues start to get worked out. She clearly didn’t mind when that group of stallions were sort of looking at her on the beach and though it wasn’t written in the text she was blushing on the inside.
Now then as to this mystery follower Clutzy has sensed lurking nearby...
Please have her talk about her time in prison. Maybe have Celestia or at least a representative show up later as evidence for the investigation into those guards.