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I Am The Night


Mares are cute. They are also fluffy. I want to pet the pretty mares and give them snuggles.

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EVERY writer goes through times like this, dude. Seriously. You keep writing because it's who you are. :rainbowkiss:

Interesting.

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who you are

a horsefucker?:rainbowdetermined2:

you have the same problem I have, publish a story and guess what so much hate it sends me flying to hell and back. I stopped posting my story because everyone thought it was shit, NOW mind you this story was started when I was eleven to twelve but I have been fixing it since then and people still hate it......what I'm trying to say is we are in the same boat and.....don't do what I did keep going and don't stop,you get better with experience.

Man I was looking for a twilight hearts and hooves story a couple of months ago cause I had vague memories of a really nice fluffy romantic twi story I wanted to reread back from years ago but couldn't find it, I read this and decide to look at your other stories and lo and behold it was the one you wrote, crazy to think how long this fandom and this site's been going

"Finish it."

FINISH HER

Moving away from the typewriter, you grabbed Dash's head with both your wings and hooves, and without any sense of control, started fucking her face with wild abandon.

Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa....

The guy's a pegasus?

This whole time I thought it was a human...

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The wings are mentioned a couple of times in the beginning of the story. :twilightsmile:

Moving away from the typewriter, you grabbed the envelope with your wings and opened it up, a smile growing on your face.

I just realized I haven't really published a human story before (technically, I have), but I'm currently writing one.

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Glad I'm not the only one that was surprised by that.

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Reading from second person when the subject isn't your species is... a bit weird, yeah.

She laughed through her nose before tapping your snout. Despite her still looking a tad bit tired, her eyes beamed with that excitement she always carried after a nap.

"Why don't I heat up some coffee for the both of us and I can look over your stuff?"

"You? Drinking coffee?"

"Hey, even athletes need a buzz," she laughed. Dash then left the room and down for the kitchen.

Oh man, I just came so hard! How did you know my fetish?

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Man, you just found second and very specific fetish. I was soft after the last one, but now I'm ready to go!

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My mama always said I was a mind reader. ^3^

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Can confirm that every writer gets sucked off by a horse under their desk when they don't know what to write next.

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Yeah. Happens to me all the time. It can get really annoying.

I know you’ve been going through some rough times in your writing career just last week, but look at you now. The next story you write gets a lot of views and featured. This proves we care about your writing. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

Whew... man, I know the feeling this writer in the story feels spot on, right down to the letter. I've had those moments so many times, almost non-stop, and with how well this was written it was a little scary to see the thoughts and feelings I've had going in my head and heart written in someone else's story, it was freaky.

This was very nicely written, enjoyable, and I loved it :rainbowkiss: So good job, good job all around.

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I know I have. Damn horses. But hey, they succ gud.

"Finish it."

Agreed.

Unless you don't want to. You should only write when you want to, lest you risk getting burnt out like our friend... well, me, over here.

Next up on the T.V show
"Wow! They could ruin that?"
We have dick-sucking ponies and the looming threat of a North Korean nuclear bomb killing us all.

Broadcasting every day of every hour on channel 666. Only on ABC Family.

The "Slight Coffee Fetish" is an attention grabber, and it was used in a very clever way in the fic :pinkiehappy:

I like how you brought up the "Authors want more attention" issue, I feel that every author and writer have that deep inside them, but we know that bringing that up will be seen as a negative ego. The character of the author is also relatable.

Conclusion: Very clever and unique use of the coffee, Dash's character is on point, the character portrays a writer nicely, and a blowjob from Rainbow is always nice :rainbowwild:. Kinda wish we got the chance to finish her off, though.

I'll rate it 9/10, great work :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

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Kinda wish we got the chance to finish her off, though.

Don't worry, that'll come soon. :)

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Hehe, "come" soon.

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Wat.
Wat ees dees.
WAT EES DEES?!?!
WAT IS DAT SUPPOSED TO BE
*SLAPS FACE FIVE TIMES* NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN

Comment posted by V8 deleted May 10th, 2020
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Is this story the same case of "Wish It, Want It, Do It" ?

Welp, review time!

As a writer, I can of course relate to the problems the 'you' of the story is dealing with. But, as a writer who is more than happy to 'Oh, another story about two mares fucking, place bets on which one has a dick and how many' part twenty-five, I found the bits a little whiny. Even if I'm a writer who has whined about these very same issues. Maybe even because of that. But enough about psychoanalyzing, what about the parts with the penises and the cum? The sexy bits were pretty well done.

Overall, a pretty good story.

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Yeah, I wrote the story when I was in a tough spot. I wasn't expecting to be super famous like some writers here, but got annoyed that stories I genuinely enjoyed writing got very little attention or were misinterpreted as based on irl events. General stuff like that that really just bogged down any reason to write, so it stunted my motivation. I was a little insecure a few years ago. Nowadays, if people don't like my stories, that's fine. If it takes off, it takes off.

Covid really screwed with my focus, I think. Trying to get back into writing more.

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Man, I feel you on all those counts. Especially regarding reception to things I write. Glad to hear you're doing better.

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