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... Huh. It’s different. I like seeing different, especially on a site as bereft if creativity as this one.
Thumbs up.
What was the bet?
Pretty good story but, I've got 2 little nit picks
1.wouldn't dash get a good amount of money from being a wonderbolt?
2. How does anon know he won't get dash pregnant. The hypogriffs (which are a mix of pony and gryphon) exist which means that interspecies impregnation is possible in equestria. Did he get his semen tested? Did he fuck a mare and lie to dash about it? Am I analysing a porn story in the world of my little pony way to deeply? Probably.
The story was great! Loved the subtle Banned from Equestria reference, by the way.
A sequel would be good for this, it feels incompleta at the end.
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A hipogrif is the crossing of a pony and a parrot or bird, and there are those in the canon, a griffin is the crossing of a cat/lion and a parrot/bird, which there are too in equestria.
The story was okay it felt a little forced and dash just lay there like a dead fish I don't care how bad it is she would make some motion not just lay there and she herself admitted her body like it and it felt incomplete like something else is going to happen and then you mentioned a bat but you never say what it was I got to say this is one of the worst stories you made I like plenty of the other ones this one not so much so far even if this is what kind of story it is it's still felt like and then they f*** and that's it it doesn't matter if that is the kind of story it is it should still feel like while I story and not some cheesy p**** that you can rent
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Hippogriffs seem to be their own species instead of hybrids they just look like hybrids, like how the Okapi looks like a deer, zebra, hybrid but isn't related to either.
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I agree more of dash reluctantly enjoying it would be awesome.
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agreed
You have--or know of--any more stories like this with bored/uninterested mares reluctantly having sex?
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Unfortunately not. That's why I wrote this story. I like writing stories that have a premise that hasn't been done before (to my knowledge). If you find anything though, I'd be interested in reading it.
Really enjoyed this! Simple premise executed well, and Rainbow Dash's very lukewarm reaction to the sex is just perfect! Excellent stuff ^^
Finally the perfect gal for a straight dude.
Can't date straight girls cause they like dick and that's gay.
Damn I got that BFED vibe, that shit's ooold...
Sorry, but this story just felt weird and wrong. The description of fucking a dead fish just ended it for me.