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After being unable to pay her bill to the local dentist, Fluttershy is given an option to clear her bill and it is a very unconventional option. Fluttershy however, despite having great friends, is a lonely mare and wishes that just one pony would give her some attention and this is her chance to receive it.
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This was absolutely adorable!I just loved how you depicted Colgate in the story, and how the date night went as well.
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Thanks. Normally I depict Colgate as a bloodthirsty psycho but I thought writing her like this would be perfect.
This is a cute little story. I'm glad Fluttershy is so happy
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She isn't the only one who is happy!
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Do you seriously?
If that's the case, i hope you got some stories with that characterization of Colgate. Cause that would be a good read for little ol me!
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Read my "Colgate's Practice" series. I can't share links with them because they are rated M due to extreme gore and graphic torture.
They are titled
Colgate's Practice
Colgate's Practice 2: A Royal Problem
Colgate's Practice 3: Nipping the Problem in the Bud
Colgate's Practice 4: Blood, Torture and Power
If you do decide to read them, I hope you enjoy them
jesus that sped up in a rediculously real way fast. like wow good but left turn to flank touching fast. I'll have to do a video on this to better illistrate my face journey
Okay I love goofy Lyra, she is a lot of fun. And Lyra and Minuette being sisters isn't terribly far fetched.
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In a majority of my stories, they are sisters. I write them as such because of their somewhat similar mane and tail styles. I always have Lyra as the younger, goofy sister....the one people can't help but love.
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The happy, bubbly Lyra always felt so natural however.
I do like that Lyra. The hands obsessed human crazed Lyra is just too creepy for me.
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I think you've read that one....I'm not sure but in one Lyra did kidnap Megan in one of my stories because of her human obsession.
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No I didn't read that one. I stay away from those stories.
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I'm thinking of Paradise Oasis, she read that one and found it funny Lyra wanted to kidnap Megan.
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I can't say I'm surprised by that coming from Paradise. That one has their own way of things. As we all do.
Rarity has some moments in which I just want to hug her. Fluttershy I always want to hug though.
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I think that is the case with Fluttershy over all. Yeah she does have a few people who hate her but far, far fewer than any of the other members of the Mane Six.
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Yeah, Fluttershy seems like she would be a champion level cuddler. That and she is somehow able to be both adorable and beautiful at the same time. That's quite a feat. The only other ponies I can think of that manage this are Fizzy and Morning Glory from the first MLP series.
Sweet Stuff was just plain cute, and yes I want to hug her as well. I just want to hug, boop, and cuddle with all of the cute and sweet mares from MLP.
I feel that this story is a little too short. And it escalated a little much at the end there. It wasn't bad mind you, just a little hurried.
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Looking back I do agree. I am working on a sequel to it that will play out for longer.
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That would really help. Longer chapters will also help keep the pacing more even Storm. The last chapter had the best overall pacing even with the serious escalation that took place.
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That would not be very nice of Discord to do that.
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What, is Discord jealous that Colgate is stealing his girl or what and wanted to make her unappealing to her?
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The Dental products are coming!
Precious Scales what's going on?
Changelings?
Fluttershys gone Rogue . . .
Cake?
Discord Stop laughing!
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Celestia and her cake, that always gets her in trouble with Colgate.
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Brush your mane
Brush your tail
Brush your tooth
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Everypony needs to brush everything. Nopony wants a messed up mane, nopony wants a messed up tail and nopony wants bad teeth!
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tooth