I am a 17 year old Brony from Rockford Ill and my favorite pony is Pinkie Pie
When Trixie returns to Ponyville with tricks greater than Twilight could ever muster things looks suspicious. Things go from a strange situation to an apocalyptic one when she finds out that Trixie is a pawn in Discords plan to turn Equestria against Celstia and back to chaos!
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pretetious, prestedgious. Those aren't real words. Also, you misspelled Ascension. Other than that....it's an okay story. It's positively riddled with errors, (you're missing a couple periods here and there.) And Discord feels somewhat out of character. Other than that...yeah it's not the worst thing I've read. It's fine.
Thanks for pointing out my typos to me
Definitely worth reading through again, you seem to have missed a lot of typos. The story isn't that bad, it flows ok and it's pretty interesting
Hm... I think i might be interes-
WAIT!
Did you assholes just spoil the plot right in the summary?!
Are you saying I should change the summary?
Not bad my friend not bad. But when they talk you might want to split it from the others and not bunch them all togethar. But still fallowing
CELESTIAS A PERSON
Strange but not bad. Ill keep readin
I can imagine giant alicorns but that must be a different matter.