Embark

When Big Macintosh proposes to Fluttershy, Applejack realizes she is missing something in her life. Something in the form of one cyan-colored Pegasus.

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Chapter 1 · 7th Dec 2011 · 1,592 words
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Chapter 2 · 7th Dec 2011 · 943 words
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Chapter 3 · 7th Dec 2011 · 866 words
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Chapter 4 · 7th Dec 2011 · 956 words
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Chapter 5 · 10th Dec 2011 · 479 words
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Explaination · 1st Feb 2012 · 33 words
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ScootzTheRipper

ScootzTheRipper #1 · Dec 7th, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

SWEET APPLE JESUS

#2 · Dec 7th, 2011 · · · Chapter 5 ·

Kind of odd how Applebloom just smiles and walks off after her grandmother dies.
But hey, I can't do better.

See ScriptScrolls

See ScriptScrolls #3 · Dec 7th, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Seeing Big Mac and Fluttershy
Applejack: WTF!!!!!!
Rainbow Dash: ME GUSTA

Triforce of the Gods

Triforce of the Gods #4 · Dec 8th, 2011 · · · Chapter 5 ·

I would have expected Applejack to question Rainbow Dash on why she was at Twilight's instead of working.

"The Oranges left to their hotel as Applejack and Rainbow Dash walked back to Big Macintosh and Applejack, who looked like she was about to barf."
Shouldn't that second Applejack be Applebloom or something?

ParadisA