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Great cover art
Please tell me this whole thing wasn't a setup for that
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It was a late idea for the scene. I want to very loosely tie it in to the OC fic I currently have going to show a slightly more 'competent' side of the character.
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Thanks, your opinion on it was extremely valuable.
A true work of art. Good job.
this is really a complaint? i mean seriously i got my bank account when i was 10, most people get bank accounts young and the paperwork's complicated, as for chore distribution... honestly this therapist is supposed to prolong relationships right not take a shot at cutting there jugular vein and watching them bleed out over time?
my issue is this, vinyl has managed to get all of the what i would call extremely physically/mentally taxing chores well Octavia has walked away with the things you give kids five dollar allowance a week to do and cooking, you then proceeded to allow Octavia to add a caveat to make at least one of these jobs harder. meaning vinyls day off which the implication seems to be a once a week kinda deal, vinyls days pretty much packed. this in addition to the constant demand on vinyls mind and body do to work lends the addition of extra stress on her system, which in turn well eventually lead to a outflow of stress in some way or fashion that frankly won't be good for the relationship.
your story is good don't get me wrong, but it certainly seems like this was an 'Octavia was totally right' situation that seems like it well only end badly.
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No pony is free from fault; the points raised will be explored. You are right, Octavia is far from right, and that's going to be a really eye-opening revelation for her.
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then i look forward to seeing where this goes, i was just a little wary because of the tone. too many authors would have jumped too tell 'your wrong because i say so' good on you.
I showed up for the cover and was not dissapointed take that thumbs up and care for it. I got high expectations from here on out us posh Brit so good on us.
You've got a nice dynamic going on here. If I have one complaint, it's Octavia's borderline excessive swearing. I'm not averse to swearing (I cuss like a sailor myself,) it just seems a bit out of the blue and a tad out of character for her. Not that she has much official characterization, that is.
Sooo.......when are we going to see more? I'm not slowly going crazy waiting for more of this fun read! What ever are you talking about? *insert eye twitches here*
I see what you did there
Oof. That laser tag bit hits me hard.
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It may or may not stem from personal experience.
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Triple oof.