• Member Since 28th Nov, 2012
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Nether


Do not let perfection be the enemy of good.

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What would you do if you saw something in the sky that wasn't normally there? Most people would probably ignore it, go about their lives as usual. You are no ordinary person though, are you? No, the curiosity nags at you, ever blinking and twirling up in the sky. Perhaps you'd ask a friend, point it out to them?

And what happens when they don't see what you see?

You might, reasonably, think they simply don't see what you do. You might, also reasonably, start asking a few of your other friends what they think about it.

Say, perhaps, you do all of this, but the thing in the sky only seems to appear to you. Is someone else in on a prank? Are you being punked? Punished, perhaps?

Maybe you're losing your mind? It's not like you'd know for sure...

Would you?


This story takes place before Twilight becomes an alicorn, and after Discord's rehabilitation.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

Holy shit, Nether actually doing something for once?

I'm hooked already. I'm reminded of a story about how the Inca or Mayans couldn't see the ships the Spaniards arrived in because their minds had no way to perceive them. They also thought the Spaniards and the horses they rode on were one being.

Good work on setting the mood. You know there's something creepy when even Discord is creeped out. Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next one.

Aww sheeeit boi, it begins

Thinking this is one of those "humans are eldritch beings" stories? I love those kind of stories... hope to see it continue.

Good concept, I NEED MORE. More from your other stories too.

Talk about an entrance. Glad you're back.

Thought you'd sneak an update past me eh? I hope this means you're back.

It's good to know Twilight AND Luna are on the case.

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