The Canterlot High girls never took Sunset in.
The students despise her, bullying and tormenting her.
The only one who helps is her knife, decorating her skin.
Maybe she'll raise the knife a little higher...or rub out her life with an eraser.
After all...she's a monster.
This is from my wattpad account, of the same name. NOT COPYWRITE, just the same story i posted on wattpad.
Rated teen to be safe
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I like it so far and great job.
Decent. I'll give a 7/10
Also if it's finished mark it as complete
Think should be a sequel or final part. Twilight coming back with Princess Celestia hoping to find her and reconcile too late.
Last sentence cant should be can’t
Is tantalus supposed to be tantabus?
First paragraph cant needs its apostrophe, and in the song there is an i that needs to be capitol.
Second paragraph cant should be can’t.
Sanctity of life
Benifot should be benefit, if course should be of course.
This was sad for me to read, you did a good job.
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Yep, my friend told me the wrong the wrong spelling :(
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How do u mark as complete?
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Go into edit.
Look for where it says "Incomplete "
Click it and it should give you the option to mark it as complete
The writing is bad but the concept is good.
This chapter made me cry. So much so that I couldn't see what I was reading. Good job, I love it!
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that would be great!
A very good story that pulls at the heart strings.
Pretty bad actually.
It was interesting, a story that while the chapters were a little short, and the details a little sparse. Still works well together.
though I'm curious to know why it still says incomplete if it has ended already?
Couple things. First, it's too soon for Celestia and Luna to catch people beating up Sunset. Second, only giving a month's detention, even if it is EG 1 Sunset, is too linent.
In this history must put the consecuences of the other, what happen next in the next chapter.
Interesting Story, wish it had a bit more detail though.
gonna be honest here, even with suicide there is some police investigation involved, which would invariably lead to the finding out what sunset was going through, there would be arrests, (emotionally abusing someone to suicide has been tried in court and is still considered a crime)
What... the... f***!
NO! SUNSET!
Oh! You just made me hate CHS for hurting my girl
What's needed: A story where Princess Twilight Sparkle visits thirty moons after she left. And to bring the news of Sunset's passing back to Princess Celestia.
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Bossy much?
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Sorry that was my brother.
Hey OP if the story's over why is it still marked incomplete? Are you taking us out without ending?
Let’s see where this goes.
I’m sorry, but that would not be me.
It’s for Celestia and Luna to be helpful.
I must be a loser, because I’m tired 24/7.
If that was the reason she lest I wouldn’t even be mad.
I’m confused about this part.
Why didn’t she intervene before?
I can honestly understand sunset’s mindset about fluttershy.
Then why didn’t they say something?
Damn, I thought someone was gonna save her.
What’s disappointing is that they are only upset because sunset is dead.
I am picturing an alternate sequel where instead of a building Sunset jumps off a bridge into the ocean but was caught alive and start a new life somewhere. Then the story will be based on Mike Flanagan's Doctor Sleep
Well shit.
I’m gonna go cry now.
hi, just to let you know
. It is spelt wrong.
It's Sanctity of Life, and I know because it's one of my keywords.
Just pointing it out, thanks.
The story is so good! It’s emotional!!!
im depressed from just reading that