A disconcerting day could be the least of Twilight's problems as her life takes turns we never thought possible. An adventure transcending the world Twilight thought she knew is about to take hold. Can the mare survive the lessons she must learn and, if she does, what kind of life will she return to?
This story is a moderate sequel to Wish Upon a Card. However, you don't need to read that one to get into this one. Think of it more as 'Bonus Material'. You can expect a lot of chapters and a huge story from this one, I hope you enjoy it.
As a side note, this story is desperately seeking an editor. I'm looking to make this as successful as possible. So, if you would be interested in helping me out and doing some editing please get a hold of me.
P.S. Cover art would also be greatly appreciated along with any criticism you might have.
Honestly, this project has been a long time in the coming. I've paused writing it several times, but I've finally taken it to the point where it can be posted. Well, mostly. Honestly, I would have preferred to find an editor before I posted it, but it seems like that wasn't in the cards. As for the story before this one, here is a link for you to Wish Upon a Card. I learned strangely enough that links don't really work in story descriptions. As I said, it isn't a required read or anything.
P.S. This story has no guaranteed update schedule. But, I'll try to keep it up as best I can. If I can.
Baryski, you magnificent bastard. I was really disappointed when I saw Dear Celestia was canceled, so you better make up for it with this. Do not disappoint.
if this gets featured, I called it.
1589898 I will do my best to not dissapoint. Though, this is a far more serious story than Dear Celestia. I'm more proud of this one too.
If this gets featured you will probably be the only one not surprised XD
I am loving this story, I've read a wish upon a card and thought it was magnificent. I'm glad to see that you have made a squel of sorts.
I can't say I'm a particularly good editor but if need any help editing just send me a PM.
I admit I never read the prequel to this, although safe to say that is now on my to-do list. This story is one of those stories that I like to say intrigues me--I'm not hooked, but with a little extra work and some revision I may be.
Portable devices not being conducive to long reviews, I will have to leave my precise thoughts here another time; but if you still require an editor I would be happy to offer my services through whichever medium is most convenient for you.
-Lysander
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I see this video posted around a lot in comments. Sad to say, but I really have no idea what it is supposed to mean. Sorry.
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I'm glad to hear that you are liking both of them. Hope I can keep up the quality, and I'll keep you in mind for an editor.
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Revision is definitely something I need. I've had a few errors pointed out already, at least. I do most of my writing through Google docs. I'll look forward to hearing your precise thoughts and if you would still be kind enough to offer editing services I'm sure we can set something up.
Damn that cliffhanger, I can't wait to see what will happen next, and what has happened.