When Fancypants had refused that invite to yet another garden party, everypony that knew him assumed he was just busy with simple Canterlot pony things.
Apparently, the pony everypony knew wasn't known well enough.
The thrill of adventure pounding in his heart (like a certain DARING pony we all know), Fancypants feels that exploring the Everfree Forest will be simple fun.
There were two things he didn't expect while adventuring through the forest:
1) A mysterious figure with turquoise eyes.
2) A beautiful yet fateful plant.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: The cover picture was done by me. It had been made and posted in
my Deviantart account, cartuneslover16. I had made the picture
LONG before I made this story, but it had been finished around
the time my first story, Discordant Feelings, was still continuing
because I felt people who adored Fancypants would wonder how
exactly he and Zecora had met as hinted in my other story. :)
Now THAT is a new ship. And quite the nice one.
Zecora x Fancypants?
that's a new one
I agree with my previous fellow readers and I have to say it pleases me, simply for being new. Also very well written and interesting.
Very well written. These two seem to make a very interesting couple.
You know, I really could see him as the safari-pursuing type. Especially with that accent.
Errors: There were a few, but here are some big-ish ones.
"He immediately ceased his protest for the dooming plant as he eyes glanced [...]" - His eyes.
"Realizing he was appearing more like a helpless, little colt than a stallion of high intellectual and conduct, [...]" - Intelligence and conduct?
Anyhoof, good show!
Because I liked your Discordant Feelings-Fanfiction I also read this and your writing stil is very good and the story too, espicially because of this new pair Zecora Fancypants.
Very nicely done.
Oh no it's the posion joke flowers 😱
This was a pretty interesting story and I like the chemistry between Zecora and fancy pants and I really like how they met each other and how much fancy pants never judged her again he is a pretty cool guy this was a pretty good story keep up the good work