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Ringtael
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Ringtael
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Well, I absolutely love this story.
It probably has the best use of slang I've ever seen, with the closest example being in the real world. Most other stories just chuck a few bits in here and there, but the whole 13k chapter. Wow
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Thanks m8
Seems pretty cool, although rebranding all the names Edit:(of the places, forgot to mention that) threw me for a bit of a loop at first. After a quick re-read I understood it all :P Can't exactly say I can compare their speech to real life since all I can think of is Franklin & Lamar, so not your first source for mistake checking. Anyways, yeh, seems pretty nice so far.
definitive proof that I cannot help with slang "seems pretty nice" good lord...
I don't know why I'm diggin it so far, I just know that I am
Strictly going by the cover art, I take it this story's a Blues Brothers crossover?
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It's just an homage to a great movie about the bond between brothers who do ill advised things. I watched it with one of my C-Brothers and I thought it was perfect for a story about a pair of brothers facing challenges together, though it hasn't ironed itself out yet.
There is no escape for him
Still dont get how this is a sequel
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Max does show up, and I do include other characters from this series in A Thief's Tale
Why hiatus?
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I don't want to write it anymore.
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WWHHAAATTTT
But it was so good wtf man
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There's a reason it's on hiatus. I gotchu fam. Watch this.
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Good thing I was watching
Thanks
Seriously, what the fuck made them all batshit insane? Was Max on his few thousand years of insanity when he created this planet?
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Eeyuss
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... Well shit, then. The bro's are gonna be fucked harder than Strawberry in this world.
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Double eeyuss. That was the point of the story until Chapter Eight, so I wonder if I should just pick the story back up from there and fold it into A Thief's Tale: The Road To Penance.
So, is this gonna be cancelled for good? Also, will Jay ever be mentioned again in any Thief's Tale stories?
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Jay comes back in RTP
O_o cancelled?
Why not make the story about his brother instead I mean he's getting girls
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Why make another story about a guy who gets the girls?
Why
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Art imitates life imitates art, m80
Funny thing about this is,my last name is Underwood.
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Lmao, it's my grandfather's surname as well. I based Ty and Jay off of some of my own cousins and myself to a point