Jameson Underwood and Tyler Tydeman find themselves on the run after being set up by a sketchy fellow gang-member, diving down alleys to avoid being caught by the police. A door takes them to a dark room, and another takes them to a new world.
Well, I absolutely love this story. It probably has the best use of slang I've ever seen, with the closest example being in the real world. Most other stories just chuck a few bits in here and there, but the whole 13k chapter. Wow
Seems pretty cool, although rebranding all the names Edit:(of the places, forgot to mention that) threw me for a bit of a loop at first. After a quick re-read I understood it all :P Can't exactly say I can compare their speech to real life since all I can think of is Franklin & Lamar, so not your first source for mistake checking. Anyways, yeh, seems pretty nice so far. definitive proof that I cannot help with slang "seems pretty nice" good lord...
Well, I absolutely love this story.
It probably has the best use of slang I've ever seen, with the closest example being in the real world. Most other stories just chuck a few bits in here and there, but the whole 13k chapter. Wow
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Thanks m8
Seems pretty cool, although rebranding all the names Edit:(of the places, forgot to mention that) threw me for a bit of a loop at first. After a quick re-read I understood it all :P Can't exactly say I can compare their speech to real life since all I can think of is Franklin & Lamar, so not your first source for mistake checking. Anyways, yeh, seems pretty nice so far.
definitive proof that I cannot help with slang "seems pretty nice" good lord...
I don't know why I'm diggin it so far, I just know that I am