Ah, what a wonderful day it was. The schedualed day of the marrige of the current princess cadance and shinning armour. And while many a pony had gone off to see the happy couple, a good portion continued as if it were just a beautiful celestia given day. Well... that was the initial idea...;In a flash a common foal is turned orphan in one of the worse way, and now must learn to live without the love warmth of a ...normal... family. However, being chased into a forest after witnessing the murder of her small family changed the heart of the filly; And with nothing but a determination and hatred our little foal will grow to face one of the harshes condrums that any surviving avenger must face. Should she hunt or reform chrysalis.
You missed the days where they taught capitalisation m8?
There are several spelling errors in the summary alone, and I haven’t even opened up the first chapter yet.
Mah apooologeye's fer anny spalling eeeerors. i do better next tim.
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Not sure if sarcasm or serious. :p
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Total sacrcasm.....lol
Its a pretty interesting premise and story. Please, keep up the good work
Indeed keep up the good work!
Update?