• Member Since 30th Jan, 2012
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With her knowledge of time spells enabling Twilight Sparkle to travel into the far future of Equestria, she contemplates all she has seen, and reveals the true reason for her journey.

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Okay, I shouldn't be commenting already, but dat twist! :moustache:

I was taking a drink when I read this. Now I have to clean my screen.:rainbowlaugh:

Bwahahahahahah... (5 minutes later ....hahahahahaha! :rainbowlaugh:

What the...

One moment, it was serious, then at the end, I had to wipe my drink from my screen and remove the liquid from my lungs... lulz :rainbowlaugh:

That... that ending. I'm somewhat disappointed this didn't go for a more epic revelation, but that ending. :rainbowlaugh:

How is this not featured already???:derpyderp2:

Am I the only one who didn't find the ending funny? I mean, don't get me wrong, the whole thing was bloody brilliant...
Maybe I'm just an idiot. Yup.

Heh, that's great.:twilightsmile:

Not even eighty thousand years is enough to protect us from Twilight's attempts at... that. :twilightoops:

yes yes and more yes.

It's party of one, Twilight style.

This is amazing

wowee that was entertaining

What a twist :twistnerd: That was quite brilliant I must say, well done. I give you 6 out of five yay's :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:
Also have a moustache, you've deserved it :moustache:...who am I kidding have 2 :moustache:

Heh. I could totally see Twilight doing that. Not just for the dancing mind you, but more so she could just use the magic and... Well, probably get a sample from dirt at the end of time.

This may just be the best story of all time.

I looked at the comments before reading ,and I saw the first comment. I began reading, and I was like, "What twist ending can there be?"
...Then I saw the last sentence. This was an accurate representation of my face:
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I see this, and I think, "How did this get so many likes so early?"
And then I read it.
Oh... that's why.

This is beyond brilliant. An epic that shall be told throughout the ages.

Damn it, you made me go through all that self revelation on how we're just small blobs of random elements and how nothing we do actually matters and that life is a cruel game, for that?!

Thumbs up. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

So that's what destroyed all the life on the planet.

Taps Twilight's withers with a gentle hoof from behind...
I beat you here... and I'm the best dancer in the world! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
:twilightoops:
...
:facehoof:

Someone didn't like this? Lame.

:facehoof: What a unique ending.

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Meh. No big deal. If they legitimately didn't like it, that's their prerogative; you can't please everyone. If they downvoted just to downvote, well, I wasn't going to get their approval anyway.

Not even mad. :eeyup:

939680 I understand that, I still felt like saying it. It's like when I see dislikes on my Twidash story, I jokingly blame those dislikes on Appledash fans. I don't think it's possible to get mad over a single dislike to begin with :ajsmug:

i love this idea of twilight going into the future to be aloe with herself......
thank you for this:pinkiesmile:

My only regret is that I have but one thumb to give for this story.

I just read it again, without a drink this time.:rainbowlaugh: Just as good the second time!

Now we know who Bioware should have hired to write the ME3 ending.:moustache:

Laughing My Bucking Ass Off. Five Mustaches. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Well, this was ... strange.

Alright, you got a snicker out of me...

I wondered what the twist was as well...

It's the best Twist in the world!

Here...have a Twist. :twistnerd:

Eh, I was expecting something more profound and interesting at the end. I'd speculate this is a troll fic just from the complete change in atmosphere and tone in the last few lines.

938840 Actually, I can see why you didn't find it funny. I thought it was more sweet than funny. I mean, it made me smile, and it was funny, but you don't even have to take it as a comedic twist. It's actually rather bittersweet when you think about it.:pinkiesad2:

A very enjoyable read.

She traveled thousand years in future so she could avoid the embarrassment of being caught dancing?!

Also with deeper story before that last bit, make us think; Earth will always go on after humans is gone.

Golden!

Should've had a "pinkie pie out of fucking nowhere" at the end.

BR

Needs a better description. Available if you need me.

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