Echoed Beat is a simple watchmaker from Canterlot. On a business trip to Ponyville to sell his wares, he would never expect to meet any of the heroic mares known as the Elements of Harmony. In fact, he'd never met any of them in his life, and never had any real plans to.
When he arrives in Ponyville, however, he discovers that the Mane Six appear to already know everything about him. His past, his craft, what he carried in his cart and what he carries on his soul.
Echoed Beat never expected to be friends with the Elements of Harmony.
He certainly didn't expect them to be crying at his funeral.
The Elements of Harmony have a problem.
In the past they'd saved thousands of lives without breaking a sweat.
Why, then, can't they save a single stallion?
And worse, why does the same day keep repeating itself?
Why must they watch him die?
This is very promising.
I love the concept and it looks to be a great story.
Keep it up! ^-^
Intriguing start. Different than others I've read. Those stories have the character getting into the loop, then having to find someway out of it. This story, the Mane 6 have been in the loop for who knows how long, and who's to say if they get out. I would say when, but that is arbitrary in such a tale as this.
Good work so far, and thankfully no grammar errors to report.
(Sorry, one of my biggest pet peeves is improper spelling).