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Total Chaos.

It's been 10 years since Discord had been defeated by the Elements of Harmony. The main six and Spike had grown to be great friends, and their lives had flourished into their dreams. But one fateful day the prophecy had predicted had come, a day where harmony had no power of chaos. Even in the time of chaos order has a chance to rear it's head, but will it?

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BronyAlex

BronyAlex #1 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · ·

The Mane 6 were ALREADY great friends dammit.

BaitG

BaitG #2 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · ·

Well it's interesting. I know that you don't want people to be too harsh but I just wanted to say a few things.

First off, there are a few mistakes lying around the place. I would suggest getting a editor or proof-reader. It's better to have someone alongside you to help and advise you.

And the other thing is that it seems a bit rushed. I think we need to hear more from each character's thoughts before going head-first into things.

Sorry if I sound harsh I will give you a like though because I think this has potential.

Good luck!

Anonymous_SoFar

Anonymous_SoFar #3 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · ·

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Thanks, and yeah it was a little rushed which I didn't like that much. But being in the hospital doesn't help at all. Um I like to try to keep myself as the proof reader/ editor, even though I am horrible at it. My time is very valuable and not much can be spent doing that. I will try to make it more bearable in the later chapters.

and you will learn more about each character, or hear more about each of them. It will get better, hopefully.

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