'Actual' Reactions

This is a tale of the reactions the citizens of Equestria had when a weird creature appeared.

What will happen to this creature? How will the ponies react? Alone in a new world, or is it truly alone?

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Quite Quaint

Quite Quaint #1 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · · chapter 1 ·

Perpendicular universe actually, the two universes sometimes touches, if he went to a parallel universe there would have been Cataclysmic events in both universes... Sorry Doctor Who fan boy here! Also pretty good!

DOUGHBOY1908

DOUGHBOY1908 #2 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · · chapter 1 ·

Why do you make people so sensetive every story I read they alway get lost in the SUN! for crying out loud how hard can it BE! I just wish that I could get awy from all this that should be a good thing not bad I am also only giving it a FAV to see if it would get better if not BYE!

Anonymous_SoFar

Anonymous_SoFar #3 · Jul 14th, 2012 · · · chapter 1 ·

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Im a doctor who fan as well, but I thought it was easier to go with the whole parallel universe thing other than the perpendicular as it is more common in sci-fi things.

also thanks

senior-irish

senior-irish #4 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I would fix the paragraph spacing, assuming that i'm not the only one who can see it.

Anonymous_SoFar

Anonymous_SoFar #5 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Yeah, it is hard for me to do that. I'm not a very grammatical or writing oriented person. I can try but I guarantee nothing spectacular in the up and coming chapters

Anonymous_SoFar