In his latest series of Twitter assaults, President Trump attacks the Brony community. Despite overwhelming backlash, he claims the Brony threat is now over. If he says so, it must be true. Whatever will we Bronies do? Well, this poem says it all.
None of this is meant to be taken too seriously. If you're not fond of political satire, then this might not be for you.
Disclaimer: I do not support Trump’s regime in anyway. This entire piece is meant to be ironic and satirical. I do not consider the entire GOP wicked or corrupt and do not encourage any radical action against them under any circumstances. You are allowed to like whatever political party you want and to believe there are good things coming out of the Trump administration, that's the beauty of Free Speech.
[That being said, if you'd like to know my opinion of the President just look up Eminem's rap. Pretty much says it all.]
I just had this idea and couldn't stop writing it. Sorry. I'll try to keep politics out of my writing in the future.
Well this sure looks interesting.
I'll read it when I have some time.
Read. Liked. LOL-ed.
Oh lord, I mistook this as a blog update and thought this actually happened. Frankly, I would not be surprised if it did, which says something..
8538827 Thanks. It was a lot of fun to write.
8539539 I know, right? Thankfully, this is just a satire and not real news.
Judging by like-ratio, lots of Trump supporters here
8593918 I wouldn't be surprised
Just for the satire, faved. And somehow I wouldn't be surprised if this ever actually happens in real life. Let's hope not.
8643917 Thanks. Seriously though, let's hope it doesn't happen for real.
...it took me half the story to realize it was being told in rhyme. Could use an editor, but still funny, regardless.
8731646 Thanks. Some of the typos were intentional and I had a poetic structure in mind. Unfortunately, a lot of the stylistic stuff I wanted to do was skewed by Fimfiction's auto-formatting.
Well there’s your problem!
8825744 Full disclaimer: I tried my best not to offend everyone with this story by adding this disclaimer. Some of my family are Republicans, (who despise Trump), and I don't want them to feel personally attacked. If I'm being honest, I think the GOP has severely lackluster leadership and principles. But I find that saying this outright is a surefire way to alienate people, so I'm trying to be kind by stating it's too presumptuous to assume every single Republican congress member is as bad as Cadet Bonespurs. Still, their silence can make it difficult to imagine otherwise...
If I'm being honest, I do think they have to take a good look at themselves and reflect on their actions.
8825744 I just don't want anyone to go sending them death threats. They do deserve to be called out for their complicity, not just with the Big Dorito but with so many other special interest groups. But I do not under any circumstances condone sending people death threats.
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Name of Story: Trump declares war on Bronies
Grammar score out of 10: 9
Pros
You're a poet and you know it!
Bronies rule, Trump drools!
It was a very clever satire.
Cons
Indenting's a bit off (and yes, I am aware you already know that).
Not enough timing to process all the rhyming.
He looks more like an annoying orange than an almighty orangutan.
Notes Section (how you can improve your fic, at the very least an elaboration of Pros and Cons section)
Example: You may need to work on the indenting since, while I know you're a very talented rhymer, one can't help but feel that certain parts are a clusterfuck of rhymes.
Enjoy your review! Please help me out by looking at my story/ this story: A series of unfortunate events that leads to another redeemed villain, yay!
9442323 Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.
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My pleasure. Now, since we are both part of the Authors Helping Authors group, I believe you are obligated to give me a review (if, you know, you have the time).
9452032 I'll see if I can, but I am pretty busy these days. I'll try to do my best, but I can't make any promises. Sorry if that's not an answer you'd like to hear. But I'll still try.
9464508
It's okay, I already had two reviews from other members of the group. I can wait.
9464547 Thanks for understanding. I'll definitely try to review one of your stories.
#StillbetterthanObama