I've lived my whole life pretty well, always did good in school, I had a lot of friends, hell I was even dating. But I guess none of that matters any more, for it seems I have ripped from my world and throw into that of ponies. But hey, everything has a silver lining right? At least Im here, where I know what to expect, Right? Hopefully. Oh well, lets see what adventures will open up for me as I crash into this brand new world.
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Well he went splat
12 people don't know comic genius when they see it.
Well I dont care much about grammar and such so I say that this is a pretty good story.
A few grammatical errors but otherwise, well, okay, but I need to rant on something...
DON'T USE BRONY IN EQUESTRIA!
Otherwise...It's an okay story, have to fix a few issues though.
941447 Shut your trap he can do what ever he wants
941463 Yeah, I know, but then again, it is horribly overused and it gets dull after a while.
Also, basically a non-Brony that happens to land in Equestria makes things more interesting to read.
941467 if it gets dull then when it says human or says something that hints toward the main char being a brony DONT READ IT
941479 NO! I WILL READ IT ANYWAY CUZ I'M BADASS LIKE THAT!
doesnt matter had sex?
needs a lot of work on the grammer but apart from that a good story
try to separate the speaking parts out into a separate paragraph so that we know who's speaking
make more paragraphs!!!!
the pace is fine its fast and keeps our attention
but you need to do more build ups to give more anticipation
could have done a little better to show the sense of panic when he's falling but it's good nonetheless.
I'll read its next paragraph and see what will happen next. I'm and avid reader so I know what I'm on about.
P.S. I'm not demoting you I'm just trying to help. it's still a good story and with a little polishing up it'll be a nice read
If anyone would voulenteer as a proofreader im cool with that. Whatever can help this go as smoothly as possible.
*Reads last paragraph or so*
*thinks* 'Yo flank be on fire?'
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I love your story pic
...Go on
950830 Im not sure why but I think thats my favorite comment ever
953902 I try my best. (Not really)
FINALLY! A NEW CHAPTER!
Thank Odin for that.
interesting so far but can you please not color code it, it gets a bit annoying not to mention the yellow and pink is hard to read
yep, staying in a hawt mare's house who possibly has a crush on you? ...nah, nothing'll happen.
I think it has good potental keep it up.
also doesn't this just hurt you're eyes.
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Ah, damnit. It kinda does. Ok I get it people Ima stop color coding things
Wow, a smart rainbow dash that's a new one
I would do anything for that room! EVEN THIS!
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DOUBLE CLIFF HANGER!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Anyways.
This chapter is 120%
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CLIFFHANGER? A FUCKING CLIFFHANGER? FUCK!
Seriously man! enough NEED MOAR!
1027583 THANK JESUS!!! Naw just kidding, anyway I like it hope it updates soon.
A chapter without a cliffhanger? what is this madness!?
molestia strikes again
Good story so far! You need longer chapters! I can't really get a feeling for the story its WAAAYY to short!
moar mother of god moar
why with all the trolling
FLPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
"Luna, sister dear. He's gone now. Come turn the screen back on, I want to watch this time."
*CRASH*
trollololollolololololololol reactionface.info/sites/default/files/images/1287666826226.png 1.bp.blogspot.com/-gjocRKwyF1E/Tum5C1dOoVI/AAAAAAAAAl4/rQm7lJjvGlg/s1600/ROFL_Seal_by_ironmatt327.jpg i loled so hard at that part
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I honestly do not have the attention span to write longer chapters, other than that shorter chapters are a bit easier to deal with.
DITZY BECAUSE THE DOCTOR IS COMIN!
THIS IS
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ohhhhh what amy pond came that would be a blast hooly crap
but can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
HAHA
OH MY GOD THE DOCTOR
and start theme song sequence
seems a bit rushed to me
hmm this story seems to get more and more interesting as it goes on.
i like this chapter and i like how you put in the doctor
very good sir i like how you made vinyl a human very well done you get a mustache
1292521 yes yes FUCKING YES.
rainbow changeling princess? say WHAAAAAA NIGGA.
I understand completely, im sure we both shouted JACK YOU BASTARD at a certain point
borderlands 2 addiction is completely normal.
VINYL... SAY WAT NIGGA?