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BlackWing


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13 years have passed, Seth is now in his teenage years and has all but forgotten about the adventures his family used to have. Leaving his Island home on Signal to study in Equestria and broaden his horizons, this story will follow his misadventures.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 74 )

I'm ALIVE! Fair warning, don't expect any reasonable update schedule to this story, I'm taking a far more relaxed approach to writing. I'm doing it for fun, the way it's supposed to be, rather than for a deadline. A deadline makes it feel like a JOB, and that makes pressure and is part of why I took a break from writing to begin with.

It feels so weird thinking of Griffin & Gilda as parents >.<

HOLY SHIT YOU'RE BACK! DREAMS DO COME TRUE!

Nice to see you writing again. I look forward to seeing what kind of antics ensue.

Seths going to end up leader of the Goony Squad, with the extra rare hybrids like Hippogriff, Kirin, Quetzal etc?

Now, who will be the Third Witch/Fate, given weve had the Hag/Past and the Mother/Present, and need Maiden/Future?

holy shitballs I can die with no regrets

The ending to the last book still feels like a kick in the teeth, but seeing that this is still alive in some form dulls the ache it left.

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Yeah, well, I also don't like how the last story ended, but it NEEDED to end. To me it felt like a dying animal that I was putting out of it's misery, months would go by and I wouldn't have any creativity at all. It was a story that was over but kept going anyway. With this I have fresh characters, new adventures and plot lines, no pressure to write so I can just let the creativity flow naturally rather than spending every waking moment running through it.

8579680 I agree that the story needed to end, but my contention is that it didn't need creativity at that point, it needed payoff. That’s why the ending felt like such a kick in the teeth, it drooped everything that was previously built up and basically outright said that everything that happened, including the character development did not matter.

But that's just my opinion.

It's like Dragon Ball, where everyone is old as the series gets older and... wow. Saddening thought.

HOLY SHIT YES i love this series i read both of them and loved them hell yes

Give Seth your luck

This is one of the best stories on Fimfiction and Is there any way you could bring back Griffin and Gilds Pretty Plz with a big fat cherry on top!

Awesome that you’re back! I loved these stories.

I agree with some of the other people here, the ending of Falling Feathers kinda felt forced and it left me feeling like there was something missing, now we have the next chapter, this is great!

Also, why does Griffin care so much that Seth not find out about his past? Does it matter that much? Why did Griffin step down in the first place, seemed like he was on a roll then just kinda lost it.

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That's something I hope to explain in the story.

I missed your stories, I've read them all except one, glad to see your back though.

Great to see you writing again. I wish my feed would have told me then I would have already read this.

ITS ALIVE, and you to BlackWing (;
Deadlines shouldnt be a thing anyway, as long as im alive to read the ending when its finished thats fast enough.

Mx

WOW you started the seires in 2012. 5 years Good job.

Well, I'll keep an eye on this, since I've always enjoyed your stories. Even if you killed best Trixie, you monster :twilightangry2:

Coolio, i can already see Seths face when he finds out what his homely daddykuns used to be up to. :rainbowlaugh:
Next chapter: Toilet Sparkle meets the one responsible for the nickname. :twilightoops:

Comment posted by Demonicwolf deleted Mar 9th, 2018

Trololo, just like his old man.

Can't wait for the next chapter man

Cue death from suspense. Great chapter leaves me wanting more.

The resemblance between him and his father is almost identical.

I'm still kinda unsatisfied with how abruptly you ended Falling Feathers. You left so many awesome cliff hangers, but I can understand why you needed to stop.

:pinkiegasp: Awesome a new chapter, thanks :pinkiehappy: this made my day when I saw it in my list.

Part at the end seemed a tiny bit rushed, though good chapter, nice seeing an update

Bam! Now that is a funny thing to learn about just like that.:rainbowlaugh:

So Griffin doesn’t even want the new generation to know who he is? Damn, seems a bit unnecessary to me. But I guess he has a reason for abandoning his adventures and going full blown normal citizen.

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Yeah, Blackwing, I kinda have to agree with zdaysavior here, this chapter does sound kinda rushed, it's good, but rushed....

S M H!

This fanfic seems so dead
This is SO SAD.
Now I'm depressed.
Like this comment if you are depressed.

Hey BlackWing, I'm a new user on the site but I noticed that it's been almost a year since you last posted a new chapter on this story. And speaking of Hades, does he know about Seth?

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he hasn't been on since august last year.
you can check when they were last on by hoovering their name

Dude next chapter plz

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Yeah. I hate it when stories end in an abrupt brick wall. Ah well....

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Wait till his divine blood starts to seep in.

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Did you read the previous two stories?

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Yes I have, it's kinda how I learned a bit of Latin...

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Then you should know that Hades has knowledge of Seth. Silly billy....:derpytongue2:

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*sticks tongue out* I'm not that dumb....

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Never said dumb. Just said silly.:derpytongue2:

Why did sweet apple acres become apple orchards?

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....... fuck my brain. The whole chapter I kept referring to it as 'the apple orchards' because thats what it is to Seth, and forgot it actually had a name.

IT LIVES!

Cool to see an update for this one. So many good stories just die a quiet death here, fading away into obscurity due to a lack of updates.
As much as I enjoyed the conflict-centric nature of Griffs stories, it will be nice to see a SoL view from Seth, in the aftermath of the world you've created.
All that said, take your time. Even if it takes 5 years to finish, better to see an ending than to have the eternal 'Incomplete' (or Cancelled, if you must).

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