Do operation anchorage first

Do Mothership Zeta you could have twilight and the lone wanderer meet aliens and twilight can document yet another new species way more advanced then humans n shit but alas they try and kill you

and question will you have twilight and Albert visit the alien crash sight before the dlc?

My comment is now fuel.

966827 966823 Depending on how many people want me to do the dlc after the main quest. If many want to, then ia hold off the dlc till after the enclave have been defeated. If not, ia do some dlc during the main quest and do the rest later.

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My opinion on the DLC is that some will work, others will be hard as crap to write well. Mothership Zeta can work great, seeing the Aliens' obsession with ponies, Op Anchorage not so much, seeing as how there were no war-ponies in it. The Pitt might work if you do it right... (PM me if you want to know the plot idea for it I had in mind), Broken Steel is just more main quest really, so that would work, and Point Lookout could work well. Anyways, good fic, just a few errors throughout it.

"I'm just going to nod and say yes." damint caboose I told you to shut up!

968026 a free internet cupcake to you sir, for figuring out that ref. (hands cupcake.)

A. Broken Steel can't be done first because it expands on the main story.
B. I think OA should come first because Twilight wouldn't be in it. Might as well get it over with early. It also is the shortest DLC. (Also, the Winterized T-51b is fucking awesome!)
C. Can't wait for the Brotherhood of Steel to come in. And, eventually, LIBERTY-MOTHA FUCKIN-PRIME BITCHES!

Definitely Mothership Zeta. And wow! The moment with bomb made me laugh :3 It feels almost like playing the game So, this is Exquisitely exquisite chapter. Please make more. I mean, if you don't mind
P.S. 12/10 moustache fer ya

Point Lookout, There dark magic there, something twilight can probably fight. Or at least have them visit the Dunwich Building and have them find the obelisk. Anyway good story

Anchorage can't really work with an entirely canon fallout 3 because there is only one er holo thing but if you make two it would be a little nice to see how twilight would react to being human if you do that

I say either Mothership zeta or the pitt. Zeta just so they can both go WTF for the aliens (plus awesome energy weapons FTW) or Pitt becuase it would expand on Twilight's... emotions on humanity.

Also FUCK! I never get the Lucas sims speech success... then again I always focus on being an op fighter. Great chapter, can't wait for more.

969025 One or both of them need to atleast do the Main quest to the point of getting power armor so the t-51b armor wouldn't work for Twilight either, since it's made for humans.

In all honesty I think they should do Point Lookout first, it will be interesting to see how badly Twilight freaks out as to how the boat driver takes out part of her brain :D oh, and did anyone see their brain part in the ship where the captain was their prisoner? If he got like that in the first place. If you don't know how to do that, find out where that womans daughter is. (she's with the tribals in their church, if you negotiate with her she takes over the boat.)

WOAH WOAH WOAH! Hold on there bud. Before you even think of publishing any more chapters, you either need to secure a proof-reader or get better grammar. I love the story, and how it's going, but grammar errors are the one thing I cannot stand. I can stand it for a while, but it will eventually get to me.

1165402 thank you for the feedback, on the coloring, I removed that for later Chapters and as for the vault suit that twilight is wearing, the wanderer is going to inquire about it soon, it plays a part in the story. As for the track, well you got me there, that was a mistake. Once again, if you spot any errors, please tell me, it proves the quality, thank you.

The Mothership Zeta one can be done after all the dlcs..... could be used to somehow transport twilight and friend to equestria....

Operation Anchorage would be a good one to get over with soon if only so that the guy will........wait wait be funny as hell if somehow Twi could tamper with the Chinese Stealth Armor and get it to fit her since hey now Twi you can just hide if a fight breaks out =w=......Doubtful that is possible but regardless be a good idea for the main char to get hold of that Armory's stash if only for him to better protect Twilight since she DOES have a bounty on her head.

Trust me those Talon guys are a pain to deal with at an early level due to crappy armor and weak weapons and even more so when you got a soft squishy not really combat effective Unicorn, who is in the same boat, to protect.....doesn't help she is the main target when they come looking for them.

I always killed Mr.Burke

Two words: Point Lookout

And yet another story with great potential died.

1842012 I'm his proofreader, and I'm TRYING to get him to keep writing it.

Unless you change the people in it

1853954 TRYING implies possible failure, THERE MUST BE NO FAILURE!

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It's been almost a year, this story is already gone for good. Just accept it and move on.
Plus, stories that starts with Wanderer leaving the Vault/Courier was up in Goodsprings tends to die early due to the sheer a mount of works it takes to cover the entire main quest.

The great war didn't lasted two ours, only the final chapter did. i think it was 17 years between skirmishes since the oil reserves started dwiling. maybe less.
so far i do not like this Loner (i like the fic) but i will continue reading.

6184308 that's the resource wars you are thinking the great war lasted 2 hours check the wiki if you want