Let your smile change the world but don't let the world change your smile.
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You are a college freshman at Starswirl Academy. You know that not many of your friends are there for you anymore, except for some, and one of them happens to be Sunset Shimmer.
But, whatever it is that got you two to be friends is exactly how you and your old best friend came together. You just can't seem to put a finger on why your two friends are exactly alike.
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Excellent one-shot. You did really good here. I could feel the feels there at the end, especially after reading the Author's Note.
I liked the start but there was a bit of disjointedness with the dialogue. It made the halfway point and onwards a little jarring.
I can somewhat relate to the friend thing, but my friends used me as a way of flaunting their own selves, so there's a bit of disconnect with the story. At least for this moron! Anyways, I think there was a lot of things you could've done to make this a great story like with the "me" being one of her lackies, which'd be a great story in and of itself, but whatever.
I hope I don't come off like a jerk, because there's some really interesting stuff in this.
I have no idea who was talking, it made the topic being talked about comfusing.
Especially......did Equestria Twilight graduate human High School????