I stood in front of that cave for centuries I stood there guarding a pony I knew was dead but the proof needed to be in front of me for my spell to change owners I needed somepony to find and bring me the remains. I'm glad she brought me the skull.
(Inspired by a character I ran in a D&D game at one point.) If you want to play a creature like Myth in a dnd game I have made a homebrew species for 5e. http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/Shade_Diamond_(5e_Race)
(NOT ORIGNAL SHADE DIAMOND)
Cover Art commissioned by Zsparkonequus
https://zsparkonequus.deviantart.com/
Chapters (5)
Interesting, I like it
I must admit that the writing feels a bit odd
But i don't think that it is bad and i am really liking the unique concept
I will like and follow for i am curious to see where this story goes
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The weird writing style is probably because I'm still not completely comfortable with first-person writing.
8520989
Why Danke.
I'm liking this, take a thumbs up and adding this to my tracking.
8523639
Don't try to spoil Tia's present to Myth
I'm really liking the story so far. It's quite an interesting concept, though it's moving a bit fast. You may also want to find yourself an editor.. Not to sound rude, but your punctuation could use a bit more than a little work.
8524685
The punctuation, for the most part, is correct there are a few areas where I know I could have something else.
8524772
You have an excessive number of run-on sentences mate. And an your lack of commas leaves one believe you have some kind of vendetta against them.
8525141
I have gone and taken care of all the run-sentences I could find if I missed any I would appreciate if you could notify me with the chapter and paragraph, same with future chapters.
8525364
Noted. Looking forward to future installments still
More?
8667512
I'm having some issues on the next chapter had to do some revisions hopefully it will be done by the end of next month.
8667728
Ok.
It's actually pretty nice so far.
8691986
Danke Schon
Huh wonder what the weird pink orb is....
8693430
It's not supposed to be an orb.
8694855
Opps my bad
8695025
I can see the mistake but the new story I release which will be directly connected this one should answer some questions and piss a lot of people off.
.....what the fuck is this? Are you being serious, or is this just a late April fools joke?
I don't mean to sound angered, I'm not. I'm just at a stupored state of confusion as to why you uploaded 2 paragraphs...as a chapter...
Nothing like a quickie to remind someone your still there.
I had honestly for gotten about this, glade to know your still here.
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8870187
I had never even realized how long it had been since an update so I'm sorry and I will be working hard on the next chapter aiming for 1,500 or more to make up.
8870722
It's no worries mate. Again, I wasn't mad or upset with the chapter or you. Just really, really confused about it. I do like the story and am looking forward to more
Definitely needs a lot of punctuation work, but the concept and writing are quite good.
8933563
Yeah. And maybe a bit more backstory?