Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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Okay, alright...
I did not see the ending of this chapter coming. Not yet sure why you had Roseluck killed... but after such a brutal ending to her, I am keen to see why... The Everfree forest has a king and they have something going on with the Alicorns huh? I see this potentially going somewhere painful for the pony folk, or meaningful in the war.
Caramel the gay stallion? Right? His name already seems to be smeared with Big Mac's dong. Looks like She's getting some information right, even if its just the crude stuff..
Lily ... No, this is not me as a pony. I'm thankfully Lilly, slightly different, but I did note how closely a pony shares my name, yet is very different to me.
That totally made me laugh...
Temp turning into a stallion maybe ? I'm betting its Fluttershy's body that gets preggers. They need Dashie for the Wonderbolts.
Pinkie left?
Another thing I did not see coming.
I like the Luna inclusion. Her role so far is making me feel good.
But Twilight seems all kinds of messed up and finding out that Pinkie has abandoned her is gonna only make her mindset worse. But ... Pinkie has promised not to return for a while. So...
What be the mighty and awesome Pinkie Pie gonna do while she's away?
With a war coming, her sense will be getting more and more nuts. Yet with no Twilight to go right to in Ponyville, whats she gonna do?
Or is Twilight gonna come to her (I vote this is likley, yet Twi cant bring her home yet cause of PP promise).
Things are getting more and more messed up here with Twilight and Pinkie.
Lol
Lol blunt much...? Least she's straight to the point.
Woah... kinda nasty... Flitter AND Cloudchaser? Spotting such things on high... that’s the joys of Pegasi......
She needs better coworkers
That’s messed up in all kinds o ways, yet I also find that scene funny... I would say no, they are not like baning themselves, its definitely still having intimate time with their partner ... there's just a weird twist in there and so far, Fluttershy is seeming to take full advantage of the weird facts.
This chapter as a whole was rather quiet. But its nice to have a lul after such a set of violent events. While we have some things buliding toward darker things (Twi / Pinkie / Roseluck's episode etc) we also have potential building toward better kinds with Flutterdash and RariJack.
I look forward to more.
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Yeah let's just say that when I plotted this chapter out I was expecting it to be kind of divisive. I was planning on Pinkie and Twilight separating for a decent time since at least the beginning (around like chapter 6 or so) Same thing with the whole explanation of Pinkie's Sense since around the same time cause I may not know the exact chapter per se, I mentioned that Pinkie has ways to get around Equestria when needed. When I wrote that, I was expecting to use that as a joke that comes back, but after a year plus of writing it morphed into a downer.
I love writing Twilight and Luna, so while I am not going to ship them here, I really love how they tend to interact while writing them.
Also like the sex scene is weird cause sex can be awkward and uncomfortable at points and, well, they did switch bodies which adds onto the awkard tension. Oh and well, you kind of called who would be pregnant out of the two of them, but that's for probably next chapter or a little while later.