Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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Well, that was an explosive chapter.
You detailed the happenings very well. The fights were all rather easy to see in my mind. It was brutal but also engaging to read and the battle flowed rather nicely into the other happenings on the side as well.
It's funny that Rarity is out there fighting while AJ is not. Aj's not even at the point where shes really showing yet, seems a bit mean that shes already being restricted. Because I rather think this isn't the end of their troubles, or their need to fight. If the storm king is hovering around its going to make for some imminent hardship once Tempest's mission is complete.
I can't imagine Sunburst being happy to hear about what his maybe fillyfriend has done or that her plan to try and show off to him has wound up as a pretty much complete failure.
I hope I still get to see what his reaction is to her arrival and them meeting again after all these years.
LOL Moondancer. After all of that, I can't help but not feel for her now that she sees Twilight is well taken.
Now that our cute but munted pegasus pair are back together, does that mean we are going to see some Flutterdash coming up?
I'm hopeful that something is at least going to get mentioned on the incoming trip.
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Yeah this one was rather a big pain to write since I keep trying to push the envelope of what I can do with the story. And yeah I am planning for Applejack and Rarity to have at least a major talk about their relationship soon cause it's definitely turning into semi toxic behavior on Rarity's part. Though looking back on how I've written Rarity romantically in the story, she's really acting out the idea of a romance novel. Hyper protective and weird subtext and all that. And Applejack is completely not up for that. That's going to blow up soon.
And ironically enough, that ending of Moondancer was planned. I always knew that she would see that Twilight is happy and mostly taken. Doesn't mean that she's romantically done, just her picture of Twilight is different now. That's the cruel joke I've been planning once I added in Moondancer. Her one goal that kept her going and both ruined and saved the day was a fantasy.
The Sunburst idea gives me a few ways to add him in soon- cause while I wanted to add a scene or two of introducing him, I could easily add him in the next few chapters cause he didn't fit the tone at all. And yeah Flutterdash stuff is coming. Probably was the reason I wrote so much this month- I wanted to get back to some sense of normalcy there. And I still have that whole dream chapter to bring up with both Dash and Fluttershy cause that's still completely on the table as well.
And now Pinkie might have to see her family once again.
Let's just say that the train ride back to Manehattan is going to deal with a few of these issues right away.
Which all things considered is a lot of plot threads, but I'm nearly 150k in the story, I'm not stopping now.