Twilight messes up yet another spell. Now Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have switched bodies and there's a new Empire in town to handle. Just another day in the Elements of Harmony.
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Well.
That was explosive. I enjoyed that. Lot of good developments going on here.
How is twilight gonna restore the whole city? I hope celestia and Luna are ok too.
Or is this gonna just blow over with our evil unicorns departure in seeking her long lost boyfriend?
...doubt it. But keen to find out.
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I wasn't planning on the spell to just go away like that. And it's a spell that Starlight modified to pretty much keep everyone completely happy no matter what and throw Cantrrlot into chaos. Breaking that spell is forcing everyone back to reality. That should not get well.
Well, that was an emotional one. Hope Moondancer is okay. That line about Starlight 'technically' keeping her promise has me worried.
Also, I have to say, with RariJack stories, I always imagined if they ever had foals, Rarity would be the pregnant one, not the other way around.
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I have no idea why I usually make Applejack the pregnant one, probably just to subvert expectation. And Starlight has a promise to not kill ponies so bringing one back to life 'technically' is okay. She actually goes through a lot of mental gymnastics for the next few chapters.
FUN FACTS AT 1:28am WITH REX, WOOHOO!
ponies don't have periods, and they go through heat twice a year!
(cough) sorry I got a muddled brain and can't quite think too thoroughly- loving the story!!
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That's good, with how I wrote the story originally, I really didn't want to get into the estrus cycles and all that. And with how Equestria Girls is a thing I think I just made G4 ponies be in all intents and purposes pretty much human with their reproductive cycles. At least that sounds probable in hindsight, I never wrote any of that logic down. I've kind of moved away from the whole 9 month pregnancies in G5 fics so far. Still not doing estrus and all that stuff though so its a weird in between there. I usually just wrote the story and saw where it went and trying to tie together a whole lot of ideas from the comics and EQG and the show itself kind of became this.
Would I come back to writing this? I have no clue, a part of me does, but if I did I'd have to do a time skip. If I don't, I still think of this story as the one that made me make my own little MLP fanon ideas and use general ideas in later stories.